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In Which Professor Spock and Cadet Gaila Battle to Win the Heart of James Kirk: Part III

Aug 23, 2010 17:34

Title: In Which Professor Spock and Cadet Gaila Battle to Win the Heart of James Kirk: Part III
Author: zoetrope13
Universe: AU, Reboot
Rating: PG-13
Relationship Status: preslash, first time
Genre: Humor, Romance
Length: 2,381 words
Warnings: None
Trope: Academy, Jealousy, Seduction
Pairings: Kirk/Gaila, Kirk/Spock
Betas: The wonderfully helpful lecri and faithsummers80. But I ( Read more... )

star trek xi, spock, spock vs gaila, kirk, gaila

Comments 19

ariadnechan August 23 2010, 23:16:17 UTC

I love the chapter!!
Jim was jealous!!!!

I want Spock kissing him like now!

when the next is up??

zoetrope13 August 24 2010, 05:41:16 UTC

Hehe thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, Jim was very jealous. Hopefully the next part will be up within the week, we'll see how it goes though.

ariadnechan November 17 2010, 15:27:49 UTC

i hope you can update this soon!

zoetrope13 November 17 2010, 16:49:38 UTC

Finals are done next week, so I'll try. Sorry it's taking me so long.

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zoetrope13 August 24 2010, 05:43:00 UTC

Haha yup. Jim thinks Spock might be playing him. Thanks, yeah I'm much happier with this chapter after I added those parts. Hmm, well you'll just have to wait and see :D

chironstar August 24 2010, 05:26:44 UTC

Oooh what a great chapter! Spock is such a sweetie and Jim is so adorable (poor thing is so insecure makes me wanna give him a hug). Poor Jim is so jealous - glad to see Spock's running after him! Can't wait to read the next part! :D

zoetrope13 August 24 2010, 05:45:01 UTC

I'm glad you thought so. Yes, Jim needs lots of hugs. Thanks for the comment :D

chironstar August 24 2010, 11:42:54 UTC

You're welcome! :D Yes Jim needs lots and lots of hugs (preferably from Spock). XD

vickyblueeyez August 24 2010, 08:26:54 UTC

This is so good. I loved this chapter and can't wait for more. I wonder what Spock will say to Jim.

zoetrope13 August 24 2010, 19:07:26 UTC

Thank you very much. More should be along soon.

mardigrasmaven August 25 2010, 03:20:48 UTC

I just love it. I love that Gaila's so sweet and Spock's so sweet and they're both just wanting to love Jim and receive his love and they will cock-block each other to get it. XDDD LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

zoetrope13 August 25 2010, 18:09:53 UTC

Yeah, they're both pretty loving and nice despite sabotaging each other. I'm very glad you liked it so much :D
Thanks for the comment!