Ohhhhh! Oh yes! This is fantastic, thank you for posting your fill in your journal! *bookmarks bookmarks bookmarks* I already left a review over at the kinkmeme expressing my love, but let me repeat how much I adore this fic! I do. Very much so. :D
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. I was really proud of how it turned out, and wanted to take credit for it :D And in response to your p.s. on the kinkmeme it's very likely I will end up writing a prequel. It may not happen for a bit, but it probably will.
“I justified our bond before the Vulcan High Council I need not need to justify it to you.”
Punctuation error there. You missed out a period/fullstop after " Vulcan High Council".
“I sorry. Just so sorry.
I think you mean "I'm sorry. Just so sorry."
Quite a few grammatical and spelling errors around the place. Maybe you should get your future postings beta-ed? It might be better :) I give you kudos for effort anyway.
Thanks for pointing those out to me. Yeah, it's something I need to work on. This fic sort of snuck up on me, but I think I will look into a beta for the future. Thanks!
Um, usually I don't do this, but I'm going to quote your fic back to you, just in case you somehow don't know how epic you are, y/y? :D Finally blue eyes blinked up at him. The look that Jim would give him when he first opened his eyes for the day, giving and full of so much pure love, it was illogical but Spock could never bring himself to leave before seeing it. O.O I died of the overwhelming, all consuming love, Spock's for Jim, and mine for your fic.
“Boy, cadet, very similar. I’m not saying you shouldn’t have an idea of what you want, just sometimes you don’t know what you really need until you find it.” “Like spontaneous sex on the quad with a stranger?” “You keep bringing that up, I think that might be what you need.” XDDD Beautiful. Hilarious. And so Gaila.
Spock’s features are arranged in the same non-expression he always wears, but even as their conversation progresses Uhura can’t shake the feeling that something in his face is conveying an expression similar to one he would wear were she to kick his favorite puppy....Okay
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I already left a review over at the kinkmeme expressing my love, but let me repeat how much I adore this fic! I do. Very much so. :D
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Punctuation error there. You missed out a period/fullstop after " Vulcan High Council".
“I sorry. Just so sorry.
I think you mean "I'm sorry. Just so sorry."
Quite a few grammatical and spelling errors around the place. Maybe you should get your future postings beta-ed? It might be better :) I give you kudos for effort anyway.
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Finally blue eyes blinked up at him. The look that Jim would give him when he first opened his eyes for the day, giving and full of so much pure love, it was illogical but Spock could never bring himself to leave before seeing it.
O.O I died of the overwhelming, all consuming love, Spock's for Jim, and mine for your fic.
“Boy, cadet, very similar. I’m not saying you shouldn’t have an idea of what you want, just sometimes you don’t know what you really need until you find it.”
“Like spontaneous sex on the quad with a stranger?”
“You keep bringing that up, I think that might be what you need.”
XDDD Beautiful. Hilarious. And so Gaila.
Spock’s features are arranged in the same non-expression he always wears, but even as their conversation progresses Uhura can’t shake the feeling that something in his face is conveying an expression similar to one he would wear were she to kick his favorite puppy....Okay ( ... )
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I've not read anything like this before, but wooooow. I'm now off to stalk read everything else you've ever written.
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