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allwedidwaskiss November 13 2012, 06:39:55 UTC
this was wonderful!!! i loved it, immensely. dean's characterization was so adorable, in my own head canon he is often comprised of one-liners, flirty winks and good-natured grins (and then his all-encompassing protective streak) and i really feel like you captured that here. awesome piece!!! XD

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zoemathemata November 13 2012, 13:36:04 UTC
Thank you! I just love writing for Dean. He's fun and smart and can be profound at times too!

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harper47 November 13 2012, 18:01:36 UTC
I loved every minute of this. And this was one of those fic where once I started I had to finish. Yes I had to get dressed and go to work but I kept reading every second I could because this is just THAT good. I loved your characterizations of Dean and Cas and their slow slide into love. I really loved the scene with god where she talks about all the Cas' in all the universes and I am so happy you gave them a happy ending.

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zoemathemata November 14 2012, 03:29:42 UTC
Thank you so much!
You can thank my beta for that scene! She pointed out (rightly so) after she read the fic that I didn't explain anything so I just added that recently to wrap it all together! I'm glad you liked it as it was a late addition!

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karadin November 13 2012, 21:22:30 UTC
Fantastic fic, thank you very much. Just the right mix of suspense, romance and a believable happy ending.

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zoemathemata November 14 2012, 03:30:07 UTC
Thank you! This was a labor of love- I started it a long time ago and really struggled to finish it so I'm glad you liked it!

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nad_no_ennas November 13 2012, 23:57:57 UTC
I could barely put this down when I absolutely had to. Great plot. I love Dean's protective streak and Cas being strong as well. Torment, angst and schmoop - perfect!

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zoemathemata November 14 2012, 03:30:37 UTC
Wow, thanks! I love strong Cas! He's delicate in some ways but he's a soldier! he can be BAMF!

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starcatcher777 November 14 2012, 03:26:46 UTC
God this was good!! Seriously, you are so talented as a writer. It was so easy to imagine everything happening the way you described it! Not to mention, you had a great plot. It was fantastic to have the greater vision with Uriel keeping the story moving forward while having Cas and Dean bond over a vamp nest.

And seriously, Dean and Cas were only actually in the same city for like a third of the story yet I felt like Dean was right there the whole time through the phone and texts and stuff...it was well done. I'm seriously impressed.

Definitely bookmarking this so I can reread!!

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zoemathemata November 14 2012, 03:31:24 UTC
Wow, thanks! I'm glad you felt like they had a connection - I was VERY WORRIED because I didn't have them 'together' very much so I was afraid that connection wouldnt' come across. I'm glad it did!

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