Tender Moments That Don't Last (1/1)

[zhian_tara]

Title: Tender Moments That Don't Last
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing: Ten/Donna, sort of but not really
Rating: PG
Spoilers: 4.05, "The Poison Sky"
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: Nominated in "Fluff" for Round One of the Children of Time awards!
Summary: Missing moment from "The Poison Sky," just after the Doctor's return via teleport. Donna just...needs

Comments

[such_heights]

Eeee, yes, perfect! You've got their voices spot-on and this is a fantastic moment.

[eryaforsthye]

Oh, this is beautiful, just so perfectly tender and fitting.

*mems it*

Do you mind if I friend you? Only I absolutely adore your style of writing and would love to keep an eye on your fics. :)

*re-reads happily*

[cherryfeather]

Of course not, friend away. :) I absolutely adore your Doctor/Master, by the way. (Especially the Theta/Koschei, there's just not enough of it in this world.)

[eryaforsthye]

Done! :D

I absolutely adore your Doctor/Master, by the way.

Really? *blushes*

I loved your Theta/Koschei fic - I remember reading it when you first posted it! It had absolutely beautiful imagery and I adored its characterisation!

Ah, yes, sorry for the babble... :)

Especially the Theta/Koschei, there's just not enough of it in this world.

Oh, yes, you're definitely right on that score... :D

(Oh, and, btw, would you rather I just friend your fic account or may I also friend your personal one?) :)

Thanks,

Erya. :)

[cherryfeather]

Oh, feel free to friend the personal. :)

--Liz

[utopia83]

Tis very pretty, indeed. They have potential.

One little nitpick: you have a tense conflict when the doctor whispers.

Good job. And thanks for good!fic.

[orockthro]

Bwahh... That was lovely!
I really enjoyed how the Doctor felt more love from a slap than from a kiss... <3 It's perfect.
And great job handling the ship stuff. I see them in exactly the way you wrote them - fantastic partners, but awful lovers.
:)
Thanks for writing and posting!

[ambrosia_1]

This is lovely! A very nice bit of interaction.