Yunho/Jaejoong One Sentence Prompt

Oct 17, 2009 22:18

Written for 1sentence
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Theme set: Alpha
Title: YunJae in Fifty Sentences
Rating: G-PG-13 (for one sentence)
Warning[s]: Liberal construction of the phrase "one sentence", super-long sentences
Notes: Yes, I finally finished this!!!! First YunJae fic - hopefully there'll be lots more to come!

YunJae in Fifty Sentences )

pairing: yunjae, prompt fic

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moonkissedx October 18 2009, 06:21:56 UTC
this was absolutely so much love. ♥

awesome, really.

hopefully, there'll be lots more to come!

i hope so too! 8D write more, write more!

loved this ♥

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zhi_er October 18 2009, 15:38:41 UTC
Thank you!! This is my first time writing YunJae, so I was worried it'll be a disaster, but glad to know it wasn't too bad. =D I hope to write more of them, too - their love is so inspirational!

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pabogateunfish October 18 2009, 06:42:21 UTC
wow.

i think you've caught the essence of yunjae for a first-time writer of this pairing. i adore this so much. my favorites would be no 21, 25, 36, 39, 41, 48, 49, and 50. /grins

please to be writing more for this fandom. ^u^ ♥

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zhi_er October 18 2009, 15:50:17 UTC
Awww, thanks for your wonderful comment!! I was so worried that they'll be out of character >__<;;. Also, thanks for telling me which ones you liked!! I also liked those, too.

please to be writing more for this fandom.
I hope to write more YunJae as well - I liked other fandoms before but never felt this inspired to actually write fics until now.

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locofruitcake October 18 2009, 07:13:57 UTC
some of these were absolutely breathtaking ♥

#48 waves - Like waves resonating with matching vibrating frequencies, the five of them together was a sum greater than its parts that could collapse bridges, break records, be unstoppable, and were unstoppable.
#48 was especially good for me. it's something close to heart, something that's happening in the form of dong bang shin ki.

loved this! ♥

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zhi_er October 18 2009, 15:56:01 UTC
Thanks for commenting!! Even though I only recently starting liking DBSK, that's how I picture them to be - they are each so talented individually, but the five of them together...WOW. therefore, please don't disband as a result of the lawsuit!!! D:

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locofruitcake October 18 2009, 15:59:18 UTC
that's really impressive then! i think you got down their dynamics almost to a tee.
the yunjae was especially <3

great job! :'D
they won't! dong bang shin ki will last forever, hey? ^^

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zhi_er October 18 2009, 16:13:01 UTC
Awww, thanks! I didn't have to do much - the yunjae truly writes itself, thanks to all the fanvids, airport pics, and other pictures of them together.

Yes, they WILL last forever!! Cassies and Yunjae fans wouldn't have it any other way!!

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miu_shii October 18 2009, 07:28:24 UTC
i like it <33333333
need more~

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zhi_er October 18 2009, 15:57:04 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting!! I do hope to write more as well. =D

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haru_ran October 18 2009, 08:03:36 UTC
Awesome, hun. &hearts
It described their love so good and the obstacles to be together. >///////////////////////<
So lovely~&hearts

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haru_ran October 18 2009, 10:46:38 UTC
*haha* That may be possible. xDD
Thanks a lot again. ^^
Ah~ no, but I'm studying Japanese. ^^

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zhi_er October 18 2009, 16:03:30 UTC
Thanks for your comment! I'm glad I didn't mess up the portrayal of their relationship. I thought of them as friends first who are acting intimate in public truly for fanservice, but gradually those acts became the real thing. hope I didn't screw that up.

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