Comments | zevran: Fanfiction: Blood Poison 7

decantate in zevran

Fanfiction: Blood Poison 7

Apr 26, 2010 18:59

Rating: G
Summary: Leliana totally is non-PC over elves and Zevran totally gets what f!Surana is feeling.
Note: Actual writing of a narrative here.
Note2: If anyone asks, I've been writing about Larry Summers this whole time.

( I will never believe anything you say. )

pc: surana, fanfiction, npc: sten, npc: leliana

Comments 4

spamhead80 April 27 2010, 02:20:11 UTC

"Neria’s laugh pops open in a startled laugh and she turns away" I think you need a mouth in there ;). I'm crashing, but I wanted to let you know that you are a horrible tease in this chapter. I love it :).

decantate April 27 2010, 02:30:38 UTC

Oh, thank you! Fixed it already. And yeah, this chapter almost wants a LOT of mouths, eh? Heh heh.

kisekinotenshi April 27 2010, 23:04:14 UTC

*Snrk* I love her line about the accident. "No, just been an elf for a couple years now. DUH." XD Great, as always.

decantate April 28 2010, 02:46:43 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)