fic: every smile that's unveiled - glee, rachel/quinn, nc-17

[zerodetorres]

Title: Every Smile That's Unveiled
Author: zerodetorres
Characters: Rachel/Quinn, Brittany/Santana, Mercedes
Rating: NC-17
Length: 9,946
Timeline: 2.02, Britney/Brittany
Summary: Somewhere along the way, Quinn Fabray discovers that Rachel Berry is just a girl. Just a girl like her.

Note: For bradyyface, who puts up with way too much of my whining and doesn'

Comments

[phelipa]

Dammit.
I fully blame you if I don't finish my paper...I came on LJ for some stupid reason and now I'm going to have to read this RIGHT.NOW. ;)

[zerodetorres]

Hahaha, that is the story of my life. Hope you enjoy it! ;)

[phelipa]

Totally worth it.
This is just gorgeous - I love the whole damn thing.
But Rachel just looks so pathetic standing there, shoulders sagged and head down. And what the hell is she even doing with those pencils?
Ok, first of all? Cutest image ever! Sad as well but so irresistibly adorable :)
She's watching Santana clasp Brittany's bra - not because Brittany can't, Santana had once informed her, but because Brittany likes it when Santana touches her back - when she asks, "Why do you do it?"

Quinn's question is directed at both of the girls, but only Brittany looks up. "Do what?"

"Shower together," Quinn clarifies.
I loved this part. The idea of them showering together without actually doing anything was incredibly sexy for some reason and I love the subtle touches between the two of them. You write the best Brittany/Santana (and Rachel/Quinn now too :))!
sometimes Quinn really just wants her mother to hold her while she cries about missing baby Beth. Guh. You broke my heart with that one. Someone just needs to hug the poor girl! Also...

[zerodetorres]

Rachel Berry is adorable. I love her new bangs/look, even if they're pushing this Finn/Rachel obsessive relationship.

I think Brittana here is my real perception of them in canon, shipping aside. I just love when they're being adorable together, whether or not they're in an exclusive relationship.

I thought Quinn looked so TIRED the last ep, but that could just be Dianna. Poor girl. :( But yes, I agree that they need to touch upon it again. Quinn did have all summer to deal with it though, which might just end up being their reasoning for not going too much into it.

Haha, I love the idea of Brittana coming up with ways to make it "okay" for Quinn to be the way she is with Rachel. Those girls are my favorite forever.

♥!

The sad thing is I pretty much have been writing a bit of fic every day. I'm just awfully slow sometimes. :P Thank you so much, and good luck with your schoolwork! :D

[zerodetorres]

Thank you very much! No need to be in awe or jealous at all. ;)

[cardiogod]

I love this. And I don't even LIKE the whole Faberry thing.

And dude, if you like girlslash, check out the TNT show "Rizzoli and Isles." I think it's coming to yous guys up north in October (this month, yo). It's not the greatest crime drama ever (possible understatement), but oh my god the girlslash potential. Seriously. It is SO GAY. Like dolphins.

Basically, you should watch it. Because then you would write fic about it. And then I would read it and be very happy because you write girlslash better than just about anybody I know.

So. That is my PSA of the day.

And I loved your fic. <3

[zerodetorres]

Hahaha, yeah, I noticed you talking about that show. I'll have to check it out when I get a chance. I'm so scared of jumping into new shows though, especially those that have the potential to be fic-able. I have so much Brittana to write before the end of the month!

Thank you for loving the fic! I don't really seek out Faberry anymore, but I can pretty much warm up to any pairing if a good fic is presented to me. That, and bradyyface loves her Rachel Berry... which is why this fic is Quinn-centric, of course. ;)

[cardiogod]

Dude. Do it. There are only ten episodes. There is a dearth of good fic in the fandom, and your skills would be so appreciated. Mainly by me. This may or may not be me begging.

[zerodetorres]

Oh gosh, school is already hating my obsession with Glee. So I mean, I appreciate you wanting to spread the femslash love, I do, buuut I need to not fail everything. :P

[eliselxx]

Amazing fic as always bb ♥

Love the way you write faberry and brittana - you give them tenderness and emotion and caring!

Fave line: tasting mint and fair trade coffee and quiet desperation. - also loved the bit where rachel made the r/q cookies hehehe

[zerodetorres]

Okay, this is like the fourth time I've tried posting this comment. Maybe I'll learn to copy it to the clipboard before I hit Post. :{

ANYWAY, I love these girls and want them to be cuddlebug all the time.

Aha, I'm pretty sure I recycled that line from one of my old Bones fics. Um. And of course Rachel Berry would make Faberry cookies. ;) Thank you very much! ♥

[eliselxx]

D; lj has it in for you! haha I never learn either!

IKR.

Haha well it's still good - and recycling is - environmentally friendly? I want faberry cookies now! No probs ♥

[zerodetorres]

YOU SHOULD MAKE SOME. I will gobble them all up.

[zerodetorres]

I really want the Quinn/Mercedes friendship back on my TV screen, too. I'd love for a Faberry friendship, also. I just like friendships on this show, damn it.

Thank you very much! :D