fic: every smile that's unveiled - glee, rachel/quinn, nc-17

[zerodetorres]

Title: Every Smile That's Unveiled
Author: zerodetorres
Characters: Rachel/Quinn, Brittany/Santana, Mercedes
Rating: NC-17
Length: 9,946
Timeline: 2.02, Britney/Brittany
Summary: Somewhere along the way, Quinn Fabray discovers that Rachel Berry is just a girl. Just a girl like her.

Note: For bradyyface, who puts up with way too much of my whining and doesn'

Comments

[phelipa]

Totally worth it.
This is just gorgeous - I love the whole damn thing.
But Rachel just looks so pathetic standing there, shoulders sagged and head down. And what the hell is she even doing with those pencils?
Ok, first of all? Cutest image ever! Sad as well but so irresistibly adorable :)
She's watching Santana clasp Brittany's bra - not because Brittany can't, Santana had once informed her, but because Brittany likes it when Santana touches her back - when she asks, "Why do you do it?"

Quinn's question is directed at both of the girls, but only Brittany looks up. "Do what?"

"Shower together," Quinn clarifies.
I loved this part. The idea of them showering together without actually doing anything was incredibly sexy for some reason and I love the subtle touches between the two of them. You write the best Brittany/Santana (and Rachel/Quinn now too :))!
sometimes Quinn really just wants her mother to hold her while she cries about missing baby Beth. Guh. You broke my heart with that one. Someone just needs to hug the poor girl! Also...they had better address this soon because Quinn looks a little too 'ok' after everything that happened last season.
but then Brittany and Santana practically mount each other in the middle of the locker room right there in front of everyone, and Santana threatens to do exactly the same thing after every practice until they leave Quinn and her 'caveman' girlfriend alone.
LMAO. I love them so much it isn't even funny. Fabulous line ;)
Once in a while, Quinn still finds Rachel furiously sharpening pencils at the front of an abandoned classroom, but now she knows to wrap her arms tightly around Rachel's midsection, brush a kiss to Rachel's shoulder, and ask whose ass she has to kick.
♥ ♥ ♥
bb, you need to write fic every single day. Seriously, ever day.

(ok, now I REALLY need to go do research....secondary data isn't just going to summarize itself *sigh*)

[zerodetorres]

Rachel Berry is adorable. I love her new bangs/look, even if they're pushing this Finn/Rachel obsessive relationship.

I think Brittana here is my real perception of them in canon, shipping aside. I just love when they're being adorable together, whether or not they're in an exclusive relationship.

I thought Quinn looked so TIRED the last ep, but that could just be Dianna. Poor girl. :( But yes, I agree that they need to touch upon it again. Quinn did have all summer to deal with it though, which might just end up being their reasoning for not going too much into it.

Haha, I love the idea of Brittana coming up with ways to make it "okay" for Quinn to be the way she is with Rachel. Those girls are my favorite forever.

♥!

The sad thing is I pretty much have been writing a bit of fic every day. I'm just awfully slow sometimes. :P Thank you so much, and good luck with your schoolwork! :D

[phelipa]

Me too - and her new polka dot dress? Cutest thing ever.
Hahaha, that is awesome!! You have been posting quite a bit of fic though and it's awesome :) I write, just VERY seldom post because I never actually get around to finishing anything ;)

[zerodetorres]

You should! I'd love to read them. :)