Comments | zerodetorres: fic: this very secret (that you're trying to conceal)

zerodetorres

fic: this very secret (that you're trying to conceal) - glee, brittany/santana, r

Sep 22, 2010 02:45

Title: This Very Secret (That You're Trying To Conceal)
Author: zerodetorres
Characters: Brittany/Santana
Rating: R
Length: 2,356
Timeline: 2.01, Audition

( summary, notes and fic under cut due to spoilers )

fic: brittany/santana, !fandom: glee, fic: glee

Comments 77

leformat September 22 2010, 06:57:12 UTC

This was just what I wanted after watching tonight. This was hot, angsty, and sweet all at once. I felt bad for Santana here as much as I did in the show. I really hope they go more into detail about her having self esteem issues, or something similar. Give her a back-bone at least, and develop her character more than just making her the token bitch (which I really hope they don't do, but I am kind of worried about that). This was perfect in the sense that we DID get to see inside her head, and her weaknesses. Great job. <3

zerodetorres September 22 2010, 15:58:02 UTC

I would love to have this storyline continue on the show, because I think if Santana becomes the hugest bitch this side of Lima, she really needs that vulnerability to tie her down and make her a compelling and dynamic and likable character. Naya did fantastic last night though, so I think, you know, even if Santana becomes the token bitch, Naya will keep a bit of heart in her. And then there's always going to be Brittany. ;)

Lots of words, but what I really mean is, thank you! :D

ext_262967 September 23 2010, 00:39:19 UTC

Great job
+1

zerodetorres September 23 2010, 02:02:04 UTC

Thank you!

novel_concept26 September 22 2010, 07:02:38 UTC

I love this. It was such a bizarre plot point, and it just screamed for character analyzation. Wonderfully done.

zerodetorres September 22 2010, 15:59:33 UTC

I couldn't believe it when I read the spoilers, but then it happened and all of THIS^ is exactly what I saw happening.

And thank you! :)

gogogorilla September 22 2010, 07:12:38 UTC

"But if I'd been here, maybe I would've made you feel beautiful."

I melted. <3

zerodetorres September 22 2010, 16:00:14 UTC

I know you said you only read smut and fluff, but HAVE SOME ANGST. Haha.

Thank you for reading! :D

gogogorilla September 23 2010, 03:15:55 UTC

I CONSIDER THIS ANGST!FLUFF. WHICH I FIND ACCEPTABLE.

zerodetorres September 23 2010, 13:12:04 UTC

WELL GOOD. BECAUSE THAT'S GENERALLY WHAT I WRITE.

lynnearlington September 22 2010, 07:34:13 UTC

YOU ARE GREAT.

zerodetorres September 22 2010, 16:05:17 UTC

YES I AM.

SO ARE YOU.

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zerodetorres September 22 2010, 16:14:28 UTC

THE FIGHT WAS SO EPIC I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF.

But yeah, my heart was so sad for Santana in that scene in Sue's office! I was surprised by how much I accepted the boob job to be honest, because I thought it would ruin Santana for me. It did the complete opposite. I feel like now we're getting this vulnerability, now we're understanding why she "never says no", etc. She has insecurities! I kind of dig that.

And thank you! :)