Unseen, Pt 2/?

[zeppogrl7]

heres the next chapter of Unseen :D hope whoever reads it, enjoys it

Comments

[hilaryous2112]

this is a really cool story so far, can't wait for the next chapter! also curious to know why edward seems to be invisible to everyone except Bella...

[zeppogrl7]

thanks :D don't worry, all will be revealed :D

[summer_wolf]

Oh wow, I hope Alice doesn't think Bella's too crazy hehe. Loved this! =)

And silly me, I had to look up what s'mores were haha! They sound yummy, I wish we had those cracker things here. /random. =D

[zeppogrl7]

thanks hun :) i love that you're liking the story!!

smores are good, but i can only eat one, they're so sugary!!

[shayshay741]

Wow! This is really great. I love the au you created, and how the characters are all connected. some people get it soooo wrong. Great writing. Cant wait to find out why nobody can see edward!!

[zeppogrl7]

thank you so much! it means a lot that you think i'm getting the characters right, that was my worst fear about trying to write Twilight fic.

love your icon!

[shayshay741]

lol thanks. Nah dont worry, your writing is wonderful.

[shayshay741]

Gah!! *iz dying* nobody is updating... *cries whilst dead*

[zeppogrl7]

dont worry, im steadily working on it! should be done soon!