When We're No Longer Here - Chapter 11

Jun 01, 2010 10:48

Chapter 11 - I'm Just Trying To Be ME
Author : rei *me*
Rating : g [maybe it will rise later]
Disclaimer : Everyone knows that HSJ belong to JE. .sadly. .T_T
Summary : Imagine what will happen, if your presence are no longer exist. Imagine what will hapen, if you're no longer known by any. Imagine what will happen, if the one you can ( Read more... )

rating : g, fanfic : hey! say! jump, #multi-chapter, title : when we're no longer here

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amaya27 June 1 2010, 05:29:49 UTC
first~!! *grinning and dancing of joy*
finally~!!

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amaya27 June 1 2010, 05:56:21 UTC
everyone in very concerned about Ryo-chan ne... even his fighting partner... yet, they fight right after Ryo-chan is awake?! but i laugh at that^^~ Ryutaro was so nice giving him the hot chocolate afterwards...
Chinen is very observant here... his conversation with Ryutaro was funny but still serious.. this chapter is more like always changing from serious to humor... and i like that^^~! especially during the fight between Ryo-chan and Ryutaro.. although it was very short..
i just realized i typed quite long this time... may be it's because my exam ended yesterday and i think i did quite okay.. i'm in a very good mood today^^~
and i can sense that the next chapter will be tense since Ryo-chan was finally able to remember his nightmares... i can't wait^^~!!
thx for updating Rei-chan^^~! and i'll be waiting for ur next update too XDD

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zeon_avalanthe June 2 2010, 03:17:12 UTC
yey !! first !!
yeah, everyone LUV ryo-chan after all. . XDD
it can't be helped ne~ they're eternal rivals !! but yea, e's nice. .

well, cuz chi is a shrap-tongue spoiled brat !! *whacked*
hmm, i intended to write the longer fight between them, but thought that it'll be too long, so i cut it down. . TToTT

yey !! u finished ur exams !! wish ull get the best result ne~
and i LUV long comments. . don't worry. .

yeah ?? well, pls guess ne~ u'll know soon. . *grins*
thx for reading too !! and pls wait ne~

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amaya27 June 2 2010, 13:56:04 UTC
yey~!! i love Ryo-chan too^^!!
but they're still care for each other even when they're rivals.. it's so sweet...
Chi sure is XDD.. he's cute because of that.. but Ryo-chan is still the cutest for me!! XDD

thank you^^...

i'll always wait^^~
update soon.. *glomps*

P.S.
and about that Hidarime Tantei EYE video cut.. i found them also^^~!! Ryo-chan is soooooo cute there^^~!!

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cherry_ryosuke June 1 2010, 06:57:52 UTC
second!! XD

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cherry_ryosuke June 1 2010, 07:05:51 UTC
T^T poor yama-chan...
he felt guilty so much....

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zeon_avalanthe June 2 2010, 03:17:45 UTC
second !!
yeah. . becoz hes's too nice. . TToTT

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crystal_yr19 June 1 2010, 07:46:41 UTC
should I say third??
*hmmmm*

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crystal_yr19 June 1 2010, 07:58:36 UTC
FINALLY!!he remembered...
they really cared about him...
I'm positive that the person who was talking with ryo-chan in his dream is Kite!
n Ryutaro...
he's the youngest yet he's more matured in these kinds of situations...
n Chi...
it's rare to see him like that...

a really nice chappie,rei-chan!!
update soon!! ^_^

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zeon_avalanthe June 2 2010, 03:20:20 UTC
it's okay to say third. . XDD

yey !! he finally remembered !!
hehe. . there's nothing i should hide, so yeah, u're right. .
it was kite who was talking with ryo-chan. . XDD

un ! ryutaro is so mature despitehis age. . but yet he could be childish too sumtimes. .

well, u won't find that ind of chi everyday indeed. . XDD

thx yuki-chan !!
i'll try to update soon !!

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