Quick beta/second eye?

Apr 28, 2011 01:21

Um, is anyone (or possibly a few) willing to give me a quick art beta? I just made a couple versions of the same piece and can't decide between the two.

Basically, I'm in need of an extra set of eyes.

Any takers?

art, sherlock, original

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reni_m April 28 2011, 14:11:39 UTC
Ahaha, you know I can never say no to an art beta.

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zenodameaccount April 28 2011, 17:32:22 UTC
You are amazing, thank you! \o/

Sherlock fandom, a sorta OC. It's up-in-the-air fanon whether she's dead or not, WE SHALL SEE.

So um. I'm trying to give off poshy class vibes while at the same time making you wonder, "Wow, I am not sure but her fashion choices make me think she's sorta off in the head! Is she wearing a curtain?" "Why yes I found it in the window."So I wanted two different versions, one that represented Mummy, the other to represent Mrs. Holmes. At the moment there are two of Mrs Holmes, and I cannot decide. #1 at times too minimalist, #2 at times too New Frontier. IDK, SHE'S SUPPOSED TO BE FRENCH OR SOMETHING ( ... )

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reni_m April 28 2011, 18:58:12 UTC
She does look like she's slightly off posh.
Though for me nothing says posh like a fancy hat. Maybe one with that lovely purple trim?

Also, you don't have to put it on her head, it could be blown off. Then you would solve the problem with Troublemaker 1's minimalism background. I decided there was a breeze in your picture when I saw the ribbon from her waist blowing away.

I actually like 1 better that 2 ... for some reason 2's color just isn't working for me, but I agree that 1 is too minimal.

Did I help? I dunno if I helped lol.

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zenodameaccount April 28 2011, 19:44:35 UTC
No, you've definitely helped! <3

I know zip-all about hats, owning only a baseball cap and a Cactuar beanie, so I'll have to do a bit of research. Google French and/or English fashion shows/shoots featuring hats to get some ideas or something. I'm not sure if I'll be able to make it work (I'm reluctant to mess with the hair although a side fit might do it!), but it's definitely a good idea so I'll give it a go. :D

Thank you so much! GTG to the office now; I hope you have a great day. ♥

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