fic: Perpetual Motion (Sam/Dean, NC-17) for salt_burn_porn

Feb 12, 2013 09:13

Perpetual Motion
Sam/Dean
NC-17
3253 words
for salt_burn_porn - obstinatrix's prompt, remember that night?
warnings/enticements: sexy wrestling, drunk sex, vague Season 2 setting, frottage, blowjob

This is my first time salt-burn-porning, and I had a lot of fun :D maybe next year I will try something A LITTLE KINKY :O! :)

It almost, nearly happens once, after Sam and Dean come back from drinking. And then Dean swears he doesn't think of it again for three weeks. )

fandom: supernatural, fanfic, writing

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dear_tiger February 12 2013, 15:47:54 UTC
I love your fic :D Love it! Your writing is very poetic, and the wincest is just the right kind, just perfect and so in character.

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zempasuchil February 13 2013, 03:04:41 UTC
eeeee thanks, dude! I didn't get a notification for this comment earlier today, so I was so pleasantly surprised to see your comment at the top of the stack :DDD aaahh, every time you say you like my wincest I am tickled pink.

I hope you are well! I realize I may have an unanswered comment from you sitting in my inbox. I want to get on that.

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stripytights February 12 2013, 16:06:55 UTC
This was excellent. I love how it started- the roughness around the edges of it all. It felt really raw and genuine, and this line in particular worked for me he also realized that it just meant their wrestling was suspicious all along. I also really liked how there was no one 'moment' of realisation, that it happened along a curve.

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zempasuchil February 13 2013, 03:05:25 UTC
Eee, thank you! I had a great time writing it. Haha, yes, suspiciously sexy brother-wrestling and slow burn are my faves, I'm glad these things grabbed you too :)

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laurapetri February 12 2013, 17:24:04 UTC
yumyumyumyum

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zempasuchil February 13 2013, 03:05:58 UTC
:DDD glad you liked!

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essene February 12 2013, 18:08:32 UTC
Whew. Holy dang. I felt like I was right there for every desperate scrabbling moment. Great job!

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zempasuchil February 13 2013, 03:12:01 UTC
:D glad it worked for you! thanks!

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sagetan February 12 2013, 18:08:59 UTC
This is fantastic. I love how fond and playful they are with each other, with that edge of sexiness and brotherly violence :D

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zempasuchil February 13 2013, 03:13:53 UTC
Fond, playful Winchesters are my favorite to write :D Thanks so much!

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