fic: Perpetual Motion (Sam/Dean, NC-17) for salt_burn_porn

[zempasuchil]

Perpetual Motion
Sam/Dean
NC-17
3253 words
for salt_burn_porn - obstinatrix's prompt, remember that night?
warnings/enticements: sexy wrestling, drunk sex, vague Season 2 setting, frottage, blowjob

This is my first time salt-burn-porning, and I had a lot of fun :D maybe next year I will try something A LITTLE KINKY :O! :)

Comments

[the_rant_girl]

mmmm, LOVE IT! very hot and so atmospheric, your words have such pull to them and just so organic and perfect, gorgeous writing! ♥!!

[zempasuchil]

thank you!! aw, really thanks, these are all wonderful things to hear! Porny stuff is still new to me so this comment is v. bolstering and comforting :D

[blackrabbit42]

Aw, stripeysockette stole my favorite line... about the suspicious wrestling.

If you are new to the pornz, then you are GOING PLACES baby! This was HAWT!!

:)

[zempasuchil]

Hahahaha, who doesn't like suspiciously sexy wrestling? And oh man, thank you! heh, I've read plenty of porn but I still feel unpracticed writing it. oh well, I'll just have to keep practicing! :))

[tebtosca]

Delicious! Really beautiful writing as well <3

[zempasuchil]

Yay, thank you so much! :D

[zempasuchil]

Haha, to be a fly on their motel walls! Thanks so much!

[tabaqui]

I love the breathlessness of this, the fast-forward, full speed ahead not-thinkingness, until it's all Dean *can* think about and he goes for it without letting himself acknowledge he is until they *are*.....

Heh. Love it. :)

[zempasuchil]

:D thank you! Mm, yes, the delicate balance between "I know I want to make out with my brother" and "I won't admit that I want to make out with my brother" :)) glad you liked!