SPN fic - Like Confetti

May 30, 2007 17:37


Like Confetti. 
Dean/OFC. R. ~10,850 words.

Summary. Dean has a sordid history with deal making. Set mostly pre-series.

Notes. Originally inspired by The Little Things challenge over at Read more... )

dean winchester, spn fic

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slowtuesdays May 30 2007, 21:55:49 UTC
I really, really liked this. I like the plot, I like the unique OFC, I love Dean's little one-liners (of course). All in all, a very enjoyable fic. Great job!

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zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:19:48 UTC
And I really, really like you. *g*

I'm glad you enjoyed, and took the time to tell me so. Thank you.

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misskatieleigh May 30 2007, 23:26:44 UTC
oh wow.. I'm just floored by this. awesome.

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zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:21:27 UTC
Hee! I'm happy you liked, thank you. :)

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misskatieleigh May 31 2007, 23:59:22 UTC
more like insane amounts of LOVE...

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zelost_mind June 1 2007, 09:57:40 UTC
*g*

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amethyste5 May 31 2007, 01:01:53 UTC
Very good and very unusual, and I really enjoyed it. (Oh, and did I mention HOT?)

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zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:24:03 UTC
I'm very pleased you enjoyed, and Yay! Hot! Hot is always good, Thank you. :)

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zelost_mind June 1 2007, 08:12:40 UTC
Haha, oh dear. First of all, thank you. And secondly: I'm fairly certain you're not dumb at all, it was...quite vague.

She didn't 'get' anything from him in return for the extra wish. That's just how she rolls, she's supernatural, A Wish, and can deal out character qualities and wishes as she sees fit. (Though, she's not *supposed* to.)

She sneakily took away a "quality" (his table manners *g*) and replaced it with the wish. Other than his friendship, she didn't gain anything from it personally. (Well, apart from maybe a sense of satisfaction and a little thrill of rebellion, because she was totally not supposed to give him extra, ever.)

And, um. I know I don't tell you, so you could think up whatever you so desire for what Sam and Dean used their collective wishes for, but...

But I like to think Sam's wish is the one that gets Dean out of the crossroad demon deal somehow. Though, I'm pretty sure it's better if I let you decide for yourself what Dean's two wishes were used for.And I'm completely flattered that you still managed to ( ... )

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zelost_mind June 2 2007, 11:27:37 UTC
I like to think it's Sam's wish, too. It's like, I can see him wishing for it every single night before he falls asleep, for a whole year. How can it not be his? Right?

Right. If the universe owes Sam Winchester anything, it owes him that.

I don't mind at all. Glad I could clear things up for you, I appreciate that you were interested enough to want to know. :)

Oooh, you're a Fay fan? Man, I had a Fay piece sitting there, almost ready apart from a few beta-esque tweakings that were needed, and then AHBL happened and kripke'd the hell out of it! So now, it needs refurbishing. It's slow going, but it's getting there, I promise. :)

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elanurel May 31 2007, 20:28:54 UTC
Oh, sweetie, I read this a second time through and I still can't get my brain to work coherently when it comes to a response. It's just...I want it to be canon. Moira was lovely, Dean's voice was spot-on and the writing was so fearless I'm sitting here wishing that I wrote it myself. And I wish I could give you more constructive feedback beyond this silly little "guh" reaction and how very humbled I am that you produced this wonderful thing, this piece of art, as a result of a challenge I wrote to write something so silly and inconsequential in comparison.

This is art, Z. Pure and simple.

Except, you know, you made me cry, too. Right back at you with the Jen-love! ;-P

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zelost_mind June 1 2007, 09:16:10 UTC
Hey, if you liked it, then my work here is done! Please don't you worry about concrit or coherent feedback. Seriously, if this kinda thing ever happens again, (and lets hope it does) where I render you unable to comment, you can just put a ' * ', and that'll be good enough for me. :D

I want it to be canon. Moira was lovely, Dean's voice was spot-on and the writing was so fearless I'm sitting here wishing that I wrote it myself

I kinda want it to be canon, too. And I want you to write it! Although, I have an inkling that you are writing it, just, your version, y'know, the bigger and better version. *g*

I'm so very grateful for you and your challenge. I decided I liked the list with boots in it, and then this just...birthed.

So thank you, many times. I'm extremely pleased you enjoyed it and think the way you do about it.

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elanurel June 1 2007, 12:43:09 UTC
Please don't you worry about concrit or coherent feedback.

Well, I do worry a little bit... I mean, it's so important to me to give something coherent that I often don't read fic as much as I used to...and I broke cardinal rule number one in not leaving anything the first time I read this.

Your story is essential fandom for me, like Big Pink's Red, and I'd make the whole place read it if I could. Obviously... ;-P

I kinda want it to be canon, too. And I want you to write it! Although, I have an inkling that you are writing it, just, your version, y'know, the bigger and better version. *g*

*is blushing*

Well, I want you to write it. So there!

I'm so very grateful for you and your challenge. I decided I liked the list with boots in it, and then this just...birthed.I know I've said this so many times by now but when I read something like this, I know the comm and its challenges are doing exactly what I hoped they would do - inspire us all. And, still, I'm just gobsmacked (if you'll pardon my use of it, kinda feel like the word ( ... )

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