You. are. brilliant. It's not just the plot (and the choice of name) it's the writing. I love the style of your writing, that in the head of Dean stream of consciousness interwoved with everyday details and description. Also? Your sex scenes. GAH.
Thank you, dearest. I'm very happy it worked for you. And the sex was alright, you say? Excellent. *is gleeful* I'm extremely vain about those sex scenes. ;)
I really liked this, the slow pace of growing up and a dead end job and Moiria was so interesting a character and I wasn't expecting what came and them bumping into each other and lots of other little moments that were interesting enough for their own stories. Didn't want it to end really, wanted to know more about the wishes and who she really was.
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Your comment made me grin and grin. *is flattered*
You mentioned the slow pace of growing up and a dead end job? *nod nod* I was trying to subtly create Dean's own personal hell there, so he'd be all the more blase about them having to leave. Thanks for picking up on that. :)
I'm very, very pleased you liked it, thanks so much.
I loved this. It was brilliant and original and funny and Dean. The stream-of-consciousness thing is awesome. It keeps you in the moment so easily. And it makes it easy to identify with Dean and what he's experiencing.
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You got the whole package, love.
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You. are. brilliant.-- As are you. *bows*
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I'm very glad you enjoyed despite that, though. Thank you.
Anything in particular I can try to clear up for you?
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Thanks.
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You mentioned the slow pace of growing up and a dead end job? *nod nod* I was trying to subtly create Dean's own personal hell there, so he'd be all the more blase about them having to leave. Thanks for picking up on that. :)
I'm very, very pleased you liked it, thanks so much.
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I loved this. It was brilliant and original and funny and Dean. The stream-of-consciousness thing is awesome. It keeps you in the moment so easily. And it makes it easy to identify with Dean and what he's experiencing.
Awesome. So. Freakin'. Awesome.
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked.
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