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zelost_mind

SPN fic - Like Confetti

May 30, 2007 17:37

Like Confetti.
Dean/OFC. R. ~10,850 words.

Summary. Dean has a sordid history with deal making. Set mostly pre-series.

Notes. Originally inspired by The Little Things challenge over at ( Read more... )

dean winchester, spn fic

Comments 51

ultraviolet9a May 30 2007, 18:00:30 UTC

You. are. brilliant. It's not just the plot (and the choice of name) it's the writing. I love the style of your writing, that in the head of Dean stream of consciousness interwoved with everyday details and description. Also? Your sex scenes. GAH.

You got the whole package, love.

zelost_mind May 31 2007, 10:58:47 UTC

Thank you, dearest. I'm very happy it worked for you. And the sex was alright, you say? Excellent. *is gleeful* I'm extremely vain about those sex scenes. ;)

You. are. brilliant.-- As are you. *bows*

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zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:03:35 UTC

I'm fairly sure your confusion is warranted here. I even confused myself. *g*

I'm very glad you enjoyed despite that, though. Thank you.

Anything in particular I can try to clear up for you?

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zelost_mind June 1 2007, 03:40:25 UTC

*g* *tips hat*

innie_darling May 30 2007, 20:03:30 UTC

I really enjoyed this.

zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:04:46 UTC

And I'm very happy to hear it. *g*

Thanks.

like confetti ewanmax May 30 2007, 20:11:08 UTC

I really liked this, the slow pace of growing up and a dead end job and Moiria was so interesting a character and I wasn't expecting what came and them bumping into each other and lots of other little moments that were interesting enough for their own stories. Didn't want it to end really, wanted to know more about the wishes and who she really was.

Re: like confetti zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:13:13 UTC

Your comment made me grin and grin. *is flattered*

You mentioned the slow pace of growing up and a dead end job? *nod nod* I was trying to subtly create Dean's own personal hell there, so he'd be all the more blase about them having to leave. Thanks for picking up on that. :)

I'm very, very pleased you liked it, thanks so much.

mgbutterfly May 30 2007, 20:25:04 UTC

Oh. Oh. :::Flaily arms:::

I loved this. It was brilliant and original and funny and Dean. The stream-of-consciousness thing is awesome. It keeps you in the moment so easily. And it makes it easy to identify with Dean and what he's experiencing.

Awesome. So. Freakin'. Awesome.

zelost_mind May 31 2007, 11:17:27 UTC

Hee! *is blushing* I'm extremely pleased it made you do flaily arms. *g*

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked.