Comments | zelempa: DS Comic: Speranza's "Interrogation," Part 7 (pp. 18, 19, 20)

zelempa

DS Comic: Speranza's "Interrogation," Part 7 (pp. 18, 19, 20)

Mar 20, 2010 03:43

Story by Speranza, art by me. If you missed them, check out pp. 1-3, pp. 4-6, pp. 7-8, pp. 9-11 pp. 12-14, and pp. 15-17. Only one more part after this!

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Comments 19

alex51324 March 20 2010, 07:49:32 UTC

Oh, man, so much classic dialogue in that first page...then two more pages where (almost) no words are necessary. I like the placement of the speech bubbles in the last panel; it really conveys the emotional tone of the scene.

zelempa March 20 2010, 07:54:29 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, it was a fun mix this time; I love doing the wordless ones, but I also love all the text from that page. Fraser is definitely doing his best to get the "Ray"s in edgewise there. :)

j_s_cavalcante March 20 2010, 10:15:43 UTC

(Sorry, I couldn't find the right place to comment before. Here it is again.)

Eeeee! Starry-eyed Ray and Fraser! Smooooches! Is that Fraser's hand in Ray's back pocket? ;)

So adorable.

Your Ray likenesses are especially fabulous! I love this entire comic enormously. Thanks so much for sharing your talents with us. It's an incredible treat. \z/

zelempa March 20 2010, 15:12:25 UTC

You can comment wherever you want! I check both posts.

Thanks again!

wihluta March 20 2010, 11:04:31 UTC

*fans self*

EEEEEEH! So hot and cute and there's kissing and backside-groping and more kissing and EEEEEEH!! &hearts &hearts

Also, I am on edge here, because I completely forgot how the story ends. LOL

zelempa March 20 2010, 15:17:29 UTC

Ha, I created totally false suspense! The objections are minor, don't worry.

Yeah, there sure is a lot of kissing. I'm glad you enjoyed it--I did!

wihluta March 20 2010, 15:54:42 UTC

Nothing wrong with false suspense! ;D

laurie_ky March 20 2010, 15:34:46 UTC

They both look so beautiful, don't they, when Fraser asks Ray to be a cliche with him. Ray looks so happy. What a treat to watch this story unfold in art form.

Laurie

zelempa March 20 2010, 15:43:25 UTC

Oh, nice, I'm glad that worked. The text of this part is

"Ray," Fraser pleaded. "Look at me. I'm a cliche-be a cliche with me."

Ray blinked another couple of times-and then grinned slowly, the smile reaching his eyes, brightening his face, making him...beautiful.

NO PRESSURE FOR THE ARTIST OR ANYTHING. :)

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zelempa March 21 2010, 14:03:54 UTC

Ooh, you picked out two of my favorite panels. I was pretty pleased with the way panel 6, page 18 came out - the likenesses, I mean - and yeah, this is one of those moments when Ray knows things are getting serious. And obviously I had fun with that last panel. :)

Thanks again for your wonderful fb!