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laurie_ky March 14 2010, 04:18:20 UTC
Oh, happy day! I'm just so taken by how you're adapting this story. Love it, love it,love it.

Laurie

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zelempa March 14 2010, 14:50:58 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad!

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alex51324 March 14 2010, 04:40:09 UTC
Awesome, as always! As you know, I especially like the sense of claustrophobia in page 16, and how it visually echoes the emotional tone of the conversation.

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zelempa March 14 2010, 14:51:38 UTC
It also echoes how I had a lot of text and am not that great at fitting it in boxes. :) But overall, the claustrophobia thing is intentional, and I'm glad it's working!

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alex51324 March 14 2010, 21:39:04 UTC
Well, you know my feelings about authorial intent--even if you didn't consciously intend it in those particular spots, it still counts!

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zelempa March 20 2010, 15:19:49 UTC
Thanks! I'm always so glad when Fraser comes out well because I seem to lavish more loving attention on Ray. And it's just not fair.

Thanks, I'm really glad you're liking these!

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wihluta March 14 2010, 19:10:56 UTC
Great adaption again. :)

(on flu meds, so nothing elaborate.)

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zelempa March 20 2010, 15:20:00 UTC
Thanks! :D

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