Awesome, as always! As you know, I especially like the sense of claustrophobia in page 16, and how it visually echoes the emotional tone of the conversation.
It also echoes how I had a lot of text and am not that great at fitting it in boxes. :) But overall, the claustrophobia thing is intentional, and I'm glad it's working!
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Laurie
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Thanks, I'm really glad you're liking these!
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(on flu meds, so nothing elaborate.)
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