returning

[zeldadestry]

Title: Inexorable Sight
Fandom: Harry Potter
Character, Pairing: Snape, Lily/Snape
Rating: not explicit
Disclaimer: not my characters
Notes: quadruple drabble, second person pov

Comments

[red_erythros]

This was beautiful.

Even when you dream that you are drowning, trapped in cold water underneath a frozen sheet of ice, and she looks down at you from above, James Potter at her side, points and laughs…

It is better to see her.

I love how you ended this. Great job!

[zeldadestry]

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you for letting me know. :)

[ballsandbullets]

But it is better to see her, even if she curses you, hates you.

Even when you dream that you are drowning, trapped in cold water underneath a frozen sheet of ice, and she looks down at you from above, James Potter at her side, points and laughs…

It is better to see her.

Ouuuuuuuuuuuch. But in a really good way.

Fabulous fic. Thanks for writing it.

[zeldadestry]

You're welcome!
Glad it was the good kind of ouchie, thanks for letting me know.