Ghosts Of The Abyss: Chapter 16

[zelda_queen]

ZeldaQueen: Hello everyone! I'm sorry it's been so long since the last update, but I needed a little time to recover. Mervin's sporking was a tough act to follow, and this upcoming chapter really got me angry. Before we begin, I'd like to point out a bit of fridge horror, regarding the sex scene. First of all, Gethesemane apparently based that on

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[mancalledtrue]

You know, I've never seen At World's End and I can still tell what dialogue comes from which source. The faux-Shakespearean, "WOW I CAN WRITE DRAMA" dialogue is the noncanon.

What's the point? Why is she trying to build up battle between all sides here? We all know she's just going to end with everything the way it was in the movies (except without the whole "Jack has to start from scratch" bit and with her firmly planted in the cen-)

*The penny drops*

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Don't TELL me she's going to take Elizabeth's bit in the election scene...

[morri_delrae]

I found the sex scene on her DA account and read all of the comments. They all went on about how marvelous it was.

Meh. Some people wouldn't know a well-written sex scene from a botched sex scene even if the latter crept up on them and bit them on the ass.

She smiled. "Ah. You didn't know that your love is pregnant with her husband's child?" Ha! I was right as rain - Tia Dalma knew about the Sue's pregnancy. She could have been the one to tell her and it would have been more period-appropriate (women's health matters and all that). But no - it had to be uncle Barbossa who has since turned into a agony aunt. *sigh

[inkheartangel]

DRINK: 121