Ghosts Of The Abyss: Chapter 16
ZeldaQueen: Hello everyone! I'm sorry it's been so long since the last update, but I needed a little time to recover. Mervin's sporking was a tough act to follow, and this upcoming chapter really got me angry. Before we begin, I'd like to point out a bit of fridge horror, regarding the sex scene. First of all, Gethesemane apparently based that on
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Meh. Some people wouldn't know a well-written sex scene from a botched sex scene even if the latter crept up on them and bit them on the ass.
She smiled. "Ah. You didn't know that your love is pregnant with her husband's child?"
Ha! I was right as rain - Tia Dalma knew about the Sue's pregnancy. She could have been the one to tell her and it would have been more period-appropriate (women's health matters and all that). But no - it had to be uncle Barbossa who has since turned into a agony aunt. *sigh*
And I love how Davy Jones drags his butt all the way to the Pearl for absolutely no reason. In the movie he came, because he cared for Calypso and wanted to have a heart-to-heart - if he doesn't care for her, then what business does he even have there? If he's afraid for Kate's safety, then purposefully pissing off the goddess who is out for her blood is a monumentally stupid thing to do. Dropping by just to say: "Oh hai, I love Kate and you can just go play in traffic lol" - yeah, great move, Jones, that will keep her from killing everyone.
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