Earl Harry James Potter: Chapter 3

[zelda_queen]

ZeldaQueen: Hey there, everyone! I'm going to try to slog through this chapter and the next two. The rest should go by a lot quicker

Comments

[miyuko_matsuda]

WOW that fic...sucked Hard. Good luck with this sporking.

[zelda_queen]

Thanks! I should be able to just snip out the other lists, so it should go by quicker.

[miyuko_matsuda]

Yeah,i've been looking forward to this Since the Sue`s name showed up in the Last chapter

[zelda_queen]

She really hardly shows up at all in this thing. Then again, the plot of this fic is pretty much nonexistent.

[madamchaos]

I have to admit to being highly amused by this just because the author has no capacity for showing instead of telling.

"And everybody was shocked. Then they got over their shock. Then Ranglock read something else and everybody was shocked."

And that's... about the only amusing thing here. God damn, this is just boring. At least the chapters are really short, but... but wow.

I guess the author thought that the inheritance rituals were just SO EXCITING she couldn't possibly put them all in one chapter without BLOWING YOUR MIND (or maybe realized that putting them all together would create a singularity of supreme boredom and decided to try and save the universe...).

[zelda_queen]

"I guess the author thought that the inheritance rituals were just SO EXCITING she couldn't possibly put them all in one chapter without BLOWING YOUR MIND (or maybe realized that putting them all together would create a singularity of supreme boredom and decided to try and save the universe...)."

I suspect the former. Reading the lists, I get the feeling that she's got the mentality of a little kid who plays that they're the queen, with five billion gold coins and a crown and twenty castles across Europe.

[yemi_hikari]

I am kind of hoping that this isn't the case. Actually, I am thinking some off this comes from the Suethor's like of the 'Tudor' fandom.

[zelda_queen]

Probably. That would make sense, especially the love of the regal titles.

[anakinnotvader]

The inheritance ritual results sound like descriptions for some character in The Sims or whatever, what with all the random traits. Except that these can be blocked by Dumbledore for no reason.

Also, the amounts of gold everyone's getting seems REALLY implausible to me. But maybe it's reasonable, I don't know much about the wizarding economy.

[zelda_queen]

We're never really told how much is considered "a lot" by way of wizarding gold, but I also think it's ludicrous. Methinks the suethor has no concept of proportion.

[yemi_hikari]

I like leaving critiques for Suethors to help them. There is however, no help with this fanfic. Not when she has three Possession Sues in here. Not when there is an obvious dislike for canon. The blocking of abilities. No, just... no. Everything listed were things that you learn... you aren't born with them.

[zelda_queen]

Oh, but why bother having them learn stuff? That might run the risk of character development and plot!

[yemi_hikari]

Lol on that.

[slozar]

So, the reason people have to work for years at magic is because Dumbledore randomly decided to block most of their abilities? Eh, still better than "Time to Fix the Mistakes"

[zelda_queen]

I know, right? You'd think that those things would require *work* or something!

Yeah, at least this is laughable. "Time to Fix the Mistakes" was infuriating.