Crescendo: Prologue

[zelda_queen]

ZeldaQueen: You guys knew it was coming and now it is here: Crescendo, the sequel to the utterly fucked-up novel Hush, Hush. Over the next twenty-five chapters worth of sporkings, we're going to be treated to lovely amounts of hypocrisy, ill logic, slut shaming, general idiocy, and all the previous abuse vibes we know and hate. Not only that, but

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[winki_pop]

Incredibly boring prologue for something that's supposed to be 'tense.' Of course, the sporking is always great :P

This all plays out like something from a D-grade movie, where you know the guy at the beginning of the movie walking around in the middle of the night will be killed first and is asking for trouble! And who the fuck does he think he is sticking his gun in his waistband? You gangsta, Grey? :P

Fitzpatrick really does need to get out more. That and learn how to plan out things before she writes them.

Is it wrong that I laughed when I read that Harrison has a 'car gun'? What, to go with his kitchen gun and garage gun and gun in the toilet, too, just for the hell of it? :P Remember, guns don't kill people, dumbshit fictional characters with guns kill people :D

[zelda_queen]

"Is it wrong that I laughed when I read that Harrison has a 'car gun'?"

Not at all. XD I laughed when I read that as well.

[foxcake]

You know that a book is 100% pure rubbish when it rips off Twilight of all things. One question though: how do we know for sure that Mysterious Person is a Nephilim? Couldn't they be another angel? Sorry if I missed something...
Also, wasn't there something in Hush, hush that indicated that angels could read minds? You know, the part when they were in the restroom of the movie theatre and Nora wanted to use the fire alarm and then Patch said something along the lines of "don't even think about it"? Again, sorry if I remember wrong.
Good luck with the sporking. I thoroughly enjoyed what you did to Hush, hush. I hope you'll make it with a sound mind!

[zelda_queen]

Apologies for the late reply! ^^; To answer your question, the angels in this series are all irresponsible and selfish jerks who never think of protecting anyone. Patch is considered extremely compassionate in his love for Nora, and look at how he treats her. On a more solid detail, the Mysterious Person states that he and the other people in the group he are in are in danger of being enslaved and dehumanized by another group, which is what the fallen angels do to the Nephilim.

Ah yes, I remember that part. I honestly don't know if Patch was supposed to be reading her mind at that point. I assumed that he guessed what she was thinking, given that she was clearly freaked out, trying to make him leave her alone, and staring at the fire alarm. Looking back, I can see the idea that he was reading her mind, but it still is never explained properly.

Thanks! I hope you enjoy this one as well! (I hope I do too! XD)