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[SEISYuN] Deus ex Machina--JE/AU

Jun 10, 2008 14:01

Title: Deus ex Machina
Fandom: Johnny's Entertainment/AU
Characters: None specified
Rating: PG for concept
Summary: Humans aren't the only beings who can bend logic to suit their own purposes.
Notes: Master backstory ficlet for my SEISYuN 'verse. Ideally read after Rising Sun for full impact. Original material based on the setting from TOKIO's ( Read more... )

au, seisyun, johnny's entertainment

Comments 5

breyzyyin June 11 2008, 01:52:13 UTC

I really liked the way you wrote this! That last line was really clever to me for some reason. :)

iverin June 11 2008, 18:56:26 UTC

Thank you! I really took a while to settle on that last line, but I was happy with it in the end.

epicwaters June 11 2008, 06:36:00 UTC

now what the girl in Rising Sun said makes more sense. I figured it was just part of the propaganda, "being saved" but it seems to be that thats what the robots really are doing, on their side of things lol. unbelievable.
the robots are 'living' for the humans, is what I got from this all. since humans wanted the convenience of being lazy. humans don't know how to 'survive' anymore. oh, I love thinking great things when I should be sleeping.. ;)

I'm really glad you're still expanding this universe. really enjoying it.

iverin June 11 2008, 19:03:04 UTC

Yeah, that's sort of why I want people to read it after Rising Sun. I like the discomfort her cryptic comments cause. I think it sets the tone for the entire interpretation of the 'verse, because it's not meant to be something that is comfortable or familiar. I don't intend for it to be frightening, but definitely to make people think and to look at something they'll never experience. /RAMBLE ( ... )

epicwaters June 11 2008, 22:05:49 UTC

I completely didn't think that far lol

but yea, I got that too, from re-reading prelude, that the first motives of the robots did change. and it makes complete sense too. the created takes on the creator's flaws. ends up being worse. pretty ironic.

may sound stupid but the only time I felt bad for robots, was when a few years ago they came out with the animated Matrix videos and one of them should the history of the rise of the machines. it added a humanity image to the machines. felt weird to feel bad for something that was metal and wires.
though in your verse, I felt bad for humans because.. well.. not sure why. guess because I like doing mundane things? lol I'm not sure.

and no problem! if you plan on writing more I'm definitely looking forward to it ^^