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zeenzazada

[FanFic] Proposal [1/?]

Jul 15, 2009 15:50

Lovino looked fondly over at the other side of the sink. He allowed the kids to swim in it as he did the dishes. The kids- well, turtles - have been living with him for about five months. He was not happy at first about them, but he slowly warmed up to them allowing rare moments of kindness to suddenly appear.

Tck. tck. tck.

Lovino’s head snapped ( Read more... )

s.italy, spain, romano, fanfiction

Comments 53

mucho_burrito July 15 2009, 23:11:10 UTC

BILLY MAYS!!

Ohlordy, that gave me giggles for a while. :'D

But this was all really cute. JUST TELL HIM, ANTONIO. DX

blue_cage July 15 2009, 23:16:21 UTC

Oooooh ooooh Antonio, I'm cheering you on, don't make those turtle bastards by not marrying 'mama'.

♥ I've been following this set of stories since the first, and I do hope there will be more soon.

sucrose2071 July 15 2009, 23:22:43 UTC

The tuuuuuuuuuuurrtlllllllllles!!! 8D!! They killed me the first time, and now? It is daytime so I am allowed to squeal like a little schoolgirl and not disturb anyone XD The ending made me saaaaadd!! I want them to marry nao!

ally_music July 15 2009, 23:26:38 UTC

Mou~! The drama! TT__TT

I feel so sorry for Lovi... omg it's the first time that I'm mad on Spain (I feel sorry for him too, but damn it he's the country of passion! If his people can fight bulls and get almost killed by them they can propose too!).

‘Do you have any idea how much I hurt?’

Uhm... English is not my native language but isn't ‘Do you have any idea how much you hurt me?’ a better choice?
The other sentence sounded a bit odd to me.

zeenzazada July 15 2009, 23:37:36 UTC

ahaha, you picked the sentence I debated over. I guess that would be the better choice. Thank you very much!
first Drama fic for me ;o; hard to write.

akisilver July 15 2009, 23:51:46 UTC

While "Do you have any idea how much you hurt me?" is grammatically correct, techinically the other phrase could be used as it does make sense. I'd probably use it, and English is sadly the only language I am fluent in. ^^

ally_music July 16 2009, 04:53:58 UTC

You're welcome. :3

Aww... *patpat* But you did well.

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alliterations July 15 2009, 23:38:54 UTC

Oh, my God. Have I told you how much I love how you write Antonio?
And Alfred crying over Billy Mays had me in stitches.
Looking forward to more!

zeenzazada July 20 2009, 04:53:35 UTC

Ahaha, no. I don't think you ever mentioned that XD
thank you~! More on its way!