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mulder200 March 18 2011, 22:42:23 UTC
You have such a way of writing sex scenes that is not only hot but poignant! Fantastic!

Reading your stories is always a treat!

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zatnikatel March 20 2011, 03:09:54 UTC
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Actually poignant is a great word for what I tried to achieve with this, since sickly sweet sentiment is sort of a turn off for me. So that's a lovely thing to say. ;-)

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rince1wind March 19 2011, 00:05:15 UTC
Love Cas learning from the movies. Perfect way to learn Deanese, in which you seem to be fluent:
“Dally?” Dean spits out ferociously. “We haven’t dallied. What the fuck does that even mean?”
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Thanks very much.

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zatnikatel March 20 2011, 03:12:19 UTC
LOL you know the weird thing is that I had that BAMF!Cas scene half written and kinda ran out of steam with it so at one point I shelved it and didn't intend using it at all. But I'd had Balthazar mention the wing scene at the end of TFM and I wanted to have a scene where Cas flaps his wings and sees Dean's reaction, so it came back in, along with dally! ;-)

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janie_tangerine March 19 2011, 00:32:02 UTC
So it's like 1.30 AM and I probably should have waited until tomorrow to read this and leave a coherent review, but the sheer awesomeness of Castiel quoting awesome things and of the whole thing kind of fried my brain in the good way. But, hoping that I do sound coherent, the characterization was spot-on, you totally managed to break my heart completely for the both of them but then you totally pulled it back together at the end so I won't complain and damn but that was some of the hottest sex I've read lately. Just. Unf. I love how Cas thinks. ;) Also I loved Dean trying to dirty-talk him in the end and not really managing until the end. (Also I love that the question that answers everything has to do with Jack Nicholson XDDD that's such a Dean thing, but I love that it actually does work XDD) And that conversations about Cas saying his name like he matters -- ugh, hopeless romantic in me has died. But everyone else was spot-on (IE Sam and Balthazar, the scenes with them were great) and this was thoroughly awesome. I loved it! And I ( ... )

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zatnikatel March 20 2011, 03:24:31 UTC
It’s always such a thrill to get fb from a writer whose fic you’ve enjoyed so I was over the moon to get this comment ( ... )

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zatnikatel March 20 2011, 03:27:32 UTC
I'm thrilled you liked it! LOL, I always wondered what Cas might have done as he waited by the side of the road… thanks for your fb, I sure appreciate you taking time to read and let me know you liked it. ;-)

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cellophanecity March 19 2011, 03:07:50 UTC
I'm no good at comments, but damn this was awesome. So many parts I would quote back but I love your Castiel.

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zatnikatel March 20 2011, 03:30:22 UTC
That's real sweet of you! And I think you're great at comments! I'm just so pleased you liked it and especially Cas… though I've written him in a few fics this is the first time I've written from his POV and I really wanted to do a good job. I'm real glad it worked for you! ;-)

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