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VM Fanfic: Reconciliation 2/2

May 01, 2009 16:45

A Veronica Mars FanFic
Title: Reconcilation 2/2
Author: Zaftig_darling
Pairing/Character: LoVe
Word Count: 3700
Rating:NC17
Summary: Sequel to Resolution and Reconciliation 1/2
Spoilers: All three seasons
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of Veronica Mars. No copyright infringement is ( Read more... )

logan, fanfic, veronica

Comments 32

mitzy_spain May 2 2009, 22:10:40 UTC

It´s perfect...
the talk, the beach, the bedroom... the story, I love all the litle details, how they talk and act.
Really good...

zaftig_darling May 10 2009, 17:30:47 UTC

Thank you, I am so glad you liked it. (And I am so sorry it took me more than a week to reply.)

spygrrl76 May 2 2009, 23:13:22 UTC

Great follow-up to the first story. I love it! Fun, playful, sexy Logan and Veronica is always such a blast to see.

zaftig_darling May 10 2009, 17:31:41 UTC

Thanks for reading! I like to write them as fun and playful, it gives me a hopeful feeling.

dragynflies May 3 2009, 00:15:00 UTC

This was totally delightful, and really made my work day awesome. I tried to comment earlier on my blackberry, but it was being difficult. Anyway -- I loved this. I loved Veronica opening up to Logan, and Logan being so straightforward with her -- This is who I am, this is who I am going to be, take it or leave it. Veronica was always demanding so much from Logan and never giving anything, and it was great to see her called on that.

The sex was sweet and hot at the same time -- the running out for condoms was adorable and so real, LOL.

This fic was totally worth the wait -- and trust me, I was on pins and needles waiting for you to post!!

zaftig_darling May 10 2009, 17:32:49 UTC

I am glad you liked it - sorry it took me so long to post it, and sorry it is now taking me so long to respond to comments. I haven't had a lot of down time in the last week!

p2880 May 3 2009, 00:50:16 UTC

Wonderful! Really liked Logan talking about who he is and who he wants to be.

zaftig_darling May 10 2009, 17:33:51 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I am also hoping to have a chapter of Post Partum up this week. ;-)

love_is_epic May 3 2009, 03:03:31 UTC

I got double the pleasure because somehow I missed this gem the first time around : )

I loved how beautifully quiet this fic is, if that makes any sense at all. I love how they move back into a relationship but not without working out some of their issues. I love dramatic scenes just as much as the next girl, but you give us such emotion in such simple things. And I really loved reading the soft flow of this. Perfect!

Your dialogue is wonderful the scenes leading up to their steamy reunion was fabulous. Veronica in a wet T-shirt. I don't even swing that way but still thought it was hot.

Their are A LOT of parts to this I love but my favorite has to be:

“Do you still love me?” she asks, and he’s surprised that it could ever occur to her that he doesn’t.

^ You go fangirl. That was awesome! Really that whole part was just beautiful. And I love the character growth we're getting to see. Great job!!

zaftig_darling May 10 2009, 17:35:34 UTC

I don't swing that way, either, but I also thought it was pretty hot when I imagined it!

I really appreciate what you said about the 'quiet' in this fic, because that was deliberate on my part. Veronica's life has been lacking in quiet normalcy. I wasn't aiming for a lot of action in this story, I was aiming for small, normal moments between them. I am so glad you liked that.