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Fic - Popslash - The First Time

Oct 18, 2007 20:32

Written in response to a prompt from bubbleforest waaaay back in June.

Howie/Brian
PG-13

( The First Time )

popslash, howie/brian

Comments 11

erilyn October 19 2007, 08:36:46 UTC

What a lovely story! And I'm always in awe of how right you get the guys' voices :D

zoicite October 21 2007, 13:20:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Brian/Howie is always a hard one for me. :D

pensnest October 19 2007, 10:39:08 UTC

I really enjoyed that. Brian's feelings are so beautifully expressed.

(And I still have no Brian icon.)

zoicite October 21 2007, 13:22:05 UTC

aw, thanks so much! I've always found Brian just a little tricky to write, so I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it. :D Thanks for the feedback!

bubbleforest October 19 2007, 12:14:35 UTC

You're awesome. I mean, REALLY. I've been re-reading the snippets you wrote of this so many times the last couple of months, and the added parts are every bit as wonderful. Oh, this is just one giant ball of happy for me. I'm sorry for throwing difficult pairings your way, but Jesus, you do them so well. Their last (first!) kiss made me melt. Oh, I love them. You're SO awesome for taking my little request and writing all this.

zoicite October 21 2007, 13:25:00 UTC

YAY! I'm glad you liked it! I've gotta say, Brian/Howie turned out a lot easier from Brian's POV than it was from Howie's. I'm kind of surprised that I hadn't tried Brian POV Howie/Brian before. Even though it took me forever, I did have a lot of fun writing this.

Someday I'll learn how to write an actual ficlet, but apparently not today (or the day that I started this anyway. ;)

Thanks for the feedback! I'm so happy that you like it! Even if it did take me a billion trillion years to finish. ;)

leici October 22 2007, 07:33:40 UTC

Aww, that was really sweet. I like the little snippets over the years, and how things eventually came together at the end. Very nice.

zoicite November 18 2007, 00:51:28 UTC

aw, thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! :D

boomingvoice November 17 2007, 20:18:42 UTC

A month late, but this was great. The ending was wonderful, with right!Howie--hee. And I love the He loved her still, really. Bittersweet.

And drunk Brian! And Nick hitting on chicks. Love love love.

zoicite November 18 2007, 00:51:09 UTC

aw, thanks so much!

I love drunk Brian! I didn't realize it until I wrote this, but there totally is NOT enough drunk Brian fic out there! It's sad.