"Thank you for your purchase, we hope you'll have a nice day." (for defiancebyfire)

Sep 13, 2014 18:13

Title: "Thank you for your purchase, we hope you'll have a nice day."
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU / Romance
Word Count: 3,367
Recipient: defiancebyfire
Summary: Yuto gets a part-time job at a combini near his campus.
Author's Note: Recipient-san, I hope you like this <3 I'm not really sure if this is what you asked for, but I tried? The idea for this fic was very ( Read more... )

year: 2014, exchange: hsj anniversary exchange 2014

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HELLO I AM NOT SHOUTING I JUST HAVE FEELINGS defiancebyfire September 19 2014, 04:30:02 UTC
OH MY GOD. /gets her notes app ready for the comment vomit

let me just start with YUTO THE SCHOLARSHIP BOY. /tears up right there

Raiya. And Yuto. And shoes. Button-face cute. Yes.

Yuto and Takaki and yes okay continue being your stupid selves ilu

Jesus but YAMADA'S HAIR. IS PRETTY. OKAYYY I LIKE OMBRE-ISH. THINGS. A LOT. IDEK.

YUTO-SENPAI. HAHAHAHAHA no but really YUTO-SENPAI imagine all the strange advice he would give hahaha

Enter Chinen Yuri ♥︎

“Welcome, my most valued customer, are you finally going to buy something or is there a reason that you’re here for the fifth time this week? It’s only Friday.”

“I could report you to your boss, y’know? He’d fire you.” Chinen comments dully, but Yuto senses the smugness in his voice.

/sobs

“So are you going to give me his schedule or am I supposed to spend another week harassing you for it?”I. Just. Yes go get it now yes ( ... )

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xingphonic September 19 2014, 10:46:47 UTC
I loved this so much!!!! It’s super adorable and funny and Yamada is street smart and like it, lol, or maybe it’s because I just like seeing Yuto tormented a little. I love the way you wrote this; the humour really carries through in every scene. You are so funny, author-san. <3 The title is so cute too;;;; so cute;;

Lol the Nakajima boys and their shoes. I feel u, i feel u, but honestly. That bit about Yuto not knowing that restocking was part of the job until Takaki specifically told him cracked me up so much HAHAHAHA. And then Takaki doesn’t fire him because he’s cute WELL OKAY xD cheek pinching;;;;;;;;;

Yuto admiring Yamada’s rear-end icu. And then his smiling face being even cuter than Chinen’s embarrassing baby photos AWWWWWW. Because I mean, Chinen’s embarrassing baby photos are pretty damn cute too HAHAHA. But yes, Yamada’s smile is ace.

Sobs at Chinen because he comes into the conbini every single day, but only to stare at Takaki.
Chinen laughs, and wiggles his eyebrows. Yuto thinks he looks ridiculous doing that.lmao ( ... )

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re_riko September 19 2014, 13:44:13 UTC
OF COURSE RAIYA IS PRESH.

“But you’re too cute to be fired, so I guess you can stay~” Takaki grins, and pulls Yuto slightly lower so that he can ruffle his hair and pinch his cheeks.
TAKAKI YOUR ARGUMENT IS VALID LIKE REALLY VALID OFC

As Yuto watches the new boy walk into the back room with Takaki, he wonders why his eyes keep lingering on the boy’s rear-end.
get that booty yuto

surpassing Chinen’s embarrassing baby photos.
THIS WAS IMPORTANT. LIKE VERY.

“Really? Me too!” Yamada beams, and Yuto can’t help but smile with him.
CUTIEPIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

“Oh wait, you can, because you have no interest in anything that isn’t in my boss’s pants.”
AGGRESSIVELY CRIES ON YOU. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE BUT YEAH. CRIES MORE

He masks it with suggestive tones and flirty winks, so that the stuttering one becomes Yuto, and not him.
I REALLY LIKE THIS YAMADA. JUST SAYING

“Who needs four boxes of condoms?”

“Someone who is about to have a very nice day.”I AM THANKFUL THAT I DID NOT READ THIS IN CLASS ( ... )

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narqissa September 19 2014, 14:30:15 UTC
Oh nice! Yutoyama's senpai kouhai relationship konbini version! XD

And another work where we need to appreciate Chinen's intervention whole heartedly~

So, Yuto use bug for his assignment and he's attending calculus class. What major is he again..?

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obsessed_makpa September 21 2014, 15:16:58 UTC
“You know I can kick you out anytime I want to, right?” Takaki deadpans, and Yuto gulps visibly. “But you’re too cute to be fired, so I guess you can stay~” awwwwwww they are adorable hahahaha

“Welcome, my most valued customer, are you finally going to buy something or is there a reason that you’re here for the fifth time this week? It’s only Friday.” i can just imagine his tone here chinen is a gift to all his friends :))

(He also falls for Yamada, but Yamada did nothing to trick him.) THEEEERE WE GO ♥
“But it’s alright, it probably looks like you’re trying to seduce me.” YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

“I-you-huh?” this is beautiful so eloquent i could cry

When they finally pull away, he hears a small whine, only to realise that it was him who made the noise. AWWWWWWWWWWWW this fic was so cute and the classic idiots-in-love type awww ♥♥

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