"Thank you for your purchase, we hope you'll have a nice day." (for defiancebyfire)

Sep 13, 2014 18:13

Title: "Thank you for your purchase, we hope you'll have a nice day."
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU / Romance
Word Count: 3,367
Recipient: defiancebyfire
Summary: Yuto gets a part-time job at a combini near his campus.
Author's Note: Recipient-san, I hope you like this <3 I'm not really sure if this is what you asked for, but I tried? The idea for this fic was very ( Read more... )

year: 2014, exchange: hsj anniversary exchange 2014

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xingphonic September 19 2014, 10:46:47 UTC
I loved this so much!!!! It’s super adorable and funny and Yamada is street smart and like it, lol, or maybe it’s because I just like seeing Yuto tormented a little. I love the way you wrote this; the humour really carries through in every scene. You are so funny, author-san. <3 The title is so cute too;;;; so cute;;

Lol the Nakajima boys and their shoes. I feel u, i feel u, but honestly. That bit about Yuto not knowing that restocking was part of the job until Takaki specifically told him cracked me up so much HAHAHAHA. And then Takaki doesn’t fire him because he’s cute WELL OKAY xD cheek pinching;;;;;;;;;

Yuto admiring Yamada’s rear-end icu. And then his smiling face being even cuter than Chinen’s embarrassing baby photos AWWWWWW. Because I mean, Chinen’s embarrassing baby photos are pretty damn cute too HAHAHA. But yes, Yamada’s smile is ace.

Sobs at Chinen because he comes into the conbini every single day, but only to stare at Takaki.
Chinen laughs, and wiggles his eyebrows. Yuto thinks he looks ridiculous doing that.
lmao;; and then he asks for his schedule, pls.

Crying at that bit about Takaki not firing his ex because it would involve actually meeting her. A+, author-san, A+.

Yamada is an awkward child, Yuto realises. He masks it with suggestive tones and flirty winks, so that the stuttering one becomes Yuto, and not him. Yuto hates how knowledge of this does nothing to stop him from falling for Yamada’s tricks.
YAMADA SO STREET SMART XD

The way you write these two is too cute. TOO CUTE.
YUTO BROUGHT A BUG TO WORK. AND HE’S MORE CONCERNED THAT MALE CUSTOMERS WOULD WANT TO BUY HIM. GOODBYE.

sekrit times in the closet? O_____O

sdfhalskjf Yamada kisses him. that exchange. so good. YOU GUYS. BUT YUTO TRIES TO MEMORIES THE FEELING OF YAMADA’S LIPS ON HIS. the ‘please don’t think i’m weird?’ ugh pls have my heart. <3

“Why so glum, useless bum?” HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA
THIS ENTIRE EXCHANGE. YOUR CHINEN IS GOLD. GOLD.

Nghhhhhhh and then Yamada changes shifts. Takaki is like “these damn kids” T__T

Yutoooooooooooooooooooo. I think the scene with Yuto pining for Yamada and seeing him everywhere and counting the days is one of my favourites. ;A;

and then ‘So patient’ JKLHSDKFUHJQEWJSDGAHSJKDFAHDKKFKH
also cigarettes and strawberries. ;A;
yuto whines at the kiss ;A;
and yamada is all suave again ;A;

btw Yamada’s hair *____* black with silver tips yesssssssss. so pretty. i really want this visual image now;;

i enjoyed this a lot! <3

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