Eien Ni

[yutorin04]

Title: Eien Ni
Author: Natsu [me]
Pairing: YamaJima, !slight Tadaiki, !slight Chiitaro
Genre: Angst, Romance, Fluff and Smut at the end
Rating:PG to NC-17
Disclaimer:I only own the plot.. :P
A/N: It's better if you have Kinki Kid's "Eien Ni" when you read this.... i can't find a vid for Eien Ni in youtube but you can download the song hereyou can

Comments

[pink_stitchy]

FIRST???

Natsu-chan I'm back *giggle*

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your story!!!!

At first it's kind of heart breaking, especially the flashback part.
The way Yamada ignore Yuto, deleting his massage, ignoring his call and the saddest part when he give back the ring *crying* It's really hurt~~

But the performance part, it PERFECT!!!especially when you listening to the song while reading it.The scene was like right in front of your eyes kyaaaaaaaa *fangirlflailing*
no wonder all the fan are screaming and Daiki too~~

The smut part?no comment *grin*

Overall I LOVE your story, and know what this is my first fanfic that i read after my hiatus. and it really make me happy..

Great job!!!
Hugh and kisses >,<

[yutorin04]

okaeri~~

uwaaaaaaaaaaa...

i was going to post the fic later in heysay-fanfic but you found it first,.. XDDD
your present for getting the first spot!! XD
go here
i edited that one last night.. ahaha
and you know, because there are lots of YamaJima in the new magscans, YamaChii fans in weibo started to post YamaChii photos in weibo.. XDDD

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Thank you for loving the story~~~
i feel sorry for Yuto during the flashback.. ><
well,i was writing it while playing Eien Ni all over again and again and while writing that part I almost cried.. XD
especially when Yuto said that it's their anniversary!!!!!

i got a hard time on the performance part... nyaha.. :3
because i need to do the timing between the lyrics and the song.. XD
Daiki became a major yamajima fan.. haha

the smut part.... i was really nervous on writing it... haha.. i dunno how to make a smut scene.. >.<

uwaaaa.... i'm really happy that you like it and you're happy~~~ :D

thank you, and thank you for reading and commenting.. <3

[pink_stitchy]

Thank You ^^

the present, it was soooooo nice!!Even tough it edited it really seem like t a real one!!Good job, natsu!!
ahh really??was it a war between YamaJima and Yamachii??

Because the song really suite the storyline, perfectly!!
yeah that the saddest part, right? Forgetting your anniversary, that hurts a lots.

But still you do it really well. I enjoy that part soo much.Like I was there watching the live stage..

haha, but still you come out with a really good scene ^^
is it your first time writing smut??

It's my pleasure, beside I'm just write what I feel.and your story really does make me happy..

hey, you know how I love your long comment haha..

owh please don't kill yama-chan*begging*
they need to be together!!
I will wait for that fic
*BigHugh*

[yutorin04]

douita... ^^
hahahaha,, XDDD
first time editing something like that.. XDD
i dunno.. but recently there are more yamachii photos popping out in weibo than in the past.. XDD

un.. un... it really hurts though i haven't experienced that one yet.... plus, it seems like yama exchanged yuto for his fame... ><

i really want yamajima to sing eien ni again..
i'll be really happy if they're going to sing it again in shokura.. <3

it's my first time that's why it's short.. XDDD

i'm really happy that the fic made you happy.. XDD

i just can't stop myself on not posting long comments.. XD

the fic is about 70% complete already.. XDD
i won't let yama-chan die.. >.<.

[yutorin04]

fufufufufu... my OTPs will be forever in one fic... haha

raiya's part is totally random.. XDDD

douita ne~~~~

thanks for reading and commenting, mhadz.. :D

[rae_yang]

SERIOUSLY???!!
It's good! I even cried! I'm not a yamajima shipper but, I cried, and laughed, synchronized with what the feelings in the story are! I couldn't believe it my self! Its amusing me that I get dragged with them...
and it was really funny when I found out that Johnny-san was actually a yamajima shipper... haha...
what break me in shedding tears is the way Yuto handled i mean talked with yama-chan even when he was so angry... trying to control his anger to the person he loves., my tears just don't stop falling. I love this. And I'm so happy I read this today.

Raiya's part is so funny, I guess Yuto's manager really planned everything so well, and knows what yamajima's next move will be.

I want to read another fanfic of yours again... :)

[yutorin04]

i'm happy on reading your comment... >w<

you cried? /gives you tissue/
it was all angsty until the day of the perfromance... kinda laughable in the oerformance because of daiki.. XDDDD
haha... johnny-san appearing there is really random.. XD

i also cried while writing that part... >w<
i just applied Yuto's personality in the story.. hihi.. he's a good boy that's why he can control his temper....

glad that i made you happy.. ^^

hahaha... that part is totally random.. i don't know what to put in the ending..XD

well, i don't know if he also knows that they will proceed in ytuo's house.. ^^

there'll be another yamajima fanfic..
look forward to it..
it will be angst again, but it will end up happily since i can't take a not-a-happy-ending.. hihi

thanks for reading and commenting.. ^^

[rae_yang]

hahaha....
yeah it was totally good...
I kept laughing when Daiki kept screaming witht the fans...XD

I'll really look forward to that fanfic...
oh! can I request? haha OkaJima... kyaaaaa~ XD

[yutorin04]

XDDD

sure2... ^^

but i still need to finish 6 YamaJima fics since 5 of them are all requests.. >.<

just comment the plot, characters, and genre... no NC-17, khey? i still can't make one.. XDD

[unknownpeace]

AMAZING.
YamaJima SMUT. SO RARE.

Oooh I really ♥ you for making thisssssss
Wanna read it once again!

[yutorin04]

thanks... <3
yeah... Yamajima smut nowadays is really rare... ><
and my friends want me to make one again.. XDD

i really ♥ you for reading this.. <3

i'll read your next comment.. XDDD

thanks for reading and commenting.. ^^

[mosquitonest]

OMG. You made my day ~
that was so touching.i also love that song.
really love it. thanks for making this./hugs

[yutorin04]

♥
me too... the lyrics of the song is really lovely..

thanks... ^^
douita... ^^ /hugs back

thanks for reading and commenting... ^^