Revolutionary Girl Utena; Juri-Kozue: Wicked Ways

[musedmoose]

Title: Wicked Ways

Comments

[veleda_k]

...Yes. That was so gorgeous, raw, and hot.

I didn't read it as noncon. I read it as two incredibly messed up people playing rough with each other. And I loved it.

I love your Juri here. She's fierce, serious, and dangerous. That side of her doesn't get nearly enough attention in fanfic.

This is everything I could have hoped for.

[musedmoose]

Thank you. are you the one who suggested the prompt? this is only the second time I've done this, so getting it right for the person who gave the prompt means a lot to me.

the non-con thing was... well, sort of me covering my ass. ^_^ with all the conflict and such involved, I thought it was possible that someone could see it that way, so I figured it was best to be safe.

as for Juri, again, thank you. one of the things about her, as I see it, is that the only thing that makes her weak, in any way, is Shiori. I really wanted to show that, to make sure she didn't give in to Kozue. it made things much more difficult but a good deal more fun to write.

[wolfie]

Oh. My.

[musedmoose]

I do hope that's a good "Oh. My." ^_^ and I love your icon, what's it from?

[wolfie]

Shoujo Sect. One of the manga I scanlate -- see http://otenba-quality.com

[zombie_fetus]

And here I am, just wagging my half-eaten sandwich(completely forgotten)around, leaning over my monitor to read this. I love this pairing and I love that you wrote it. Characterization-wise, it hit all the right spots. ;p

[musedmoose]

wow, I don't think I've ever written something that's made someone forget to eat before. *grin* glad you liked it, Rio. ^_^

[perishtwice]

*poke*

;)

I've tried hard to change my wicked ways...acted like a lunatic for years

[stoic_rose]

This was so amazingly wonderful I haven't the proper words to express its greatness. Well done, that will have to do. Very very well done.

Re: I've tried hard to change my wicked ways...acted like a lunatic for years

[musedmoose]

*gulp* thank you. I have no idea how else to respond to that. but thank you so much.

and hey, someone finally recognized the title! yah. ^_^

Re: I've tried hard to change my wicked ways...acted like a lunatic for years

[stoic_rose]

So does that mean I get bonus points? *grin*

Re: I've tried hard to change my wicked ways...acted like a lunatic for years

[musedmoose]

indeed. I'd send cookies, but some things even broadband can't do. *grin*