Comments | yuncyn: 1sentence challenge

yuncyn

1sentence challenge

Jul 27, 2006 22:54

So. *koff* I joined 1sentence, a writing challenge community where you're required to write 50 sentences for a pairing.

...so I wrote about Tezuka.

And an OC.

...ye-ah. *goes and hides*

( With hope. Love should end with hope. )

pot, fanfic, 1sentence

Comments 4

aeris_888 July 29 2006, 14:08:07 UTC

The thing with your OC is that nothing comes out as forced at all; she doesn't come out as fraudulent, she comes out real and believable. So, yeah, I like what you did here. Also, I want some good quality het tezuka-centered fanfics, so this really satisfied my craving

Keep building ^_^

yuncyn July 30 2006, 09:56:17 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. ^__^ I'm glad she didn't turn out overbearing. :D;;; Glad to have satisfied that craving too. ^^

axtar July 29 2006, 14:14:05 UTC

I still say this...is beautiful. It has heart and sweet moments in all the right places, and Tezuka's personality shines through wonderfully. The relationship is believable; you can actually see (or rather, read) it blossoming subtly until it reaches that intimate level before either of them realize it has gone that far ( ... )

yuncyn July 30 2006, 10:29:55 UTC

*hugs* Thank you for all your supportive words, pal. :) I owe this to you honestly - doubt if I would have had the guts to post it if you hadn't poked me... so truly, thank you. :)