Answer part 2

Jul 22, 2018 15:49

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leiva21 July 22 2018, 17:24:50 UTC

It's been a while since I read a Juntoahi fic. I love this! The moment when Jun met Ohno seemed to involve pain and paint haha I like how smooth Ohno's way of flirting just the way I like when Ohno is trying to court Jun. Also I like the part in the train where Ohno standing in front of Jun like he wants to protect Jun. That silent but important gesture to me is sweet.
Ohno is so straightforward in his confession. That's good since I think Jun need clear answer to their mutual feelings. Also the email is romantic to read.
Thank you so much for this Yun-chan. Despite you being busy in uni you are able to write this good juntoshi.

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yun_miyake July 22 2018, 22:49:58 UTC
hi, Leiva-san, it's been a while. So happy to find your comment :)
sorry for the cheesy story line, I didn't plan to write this , but I managed to finish it earlier haha.
that part perhaps was my favorite as well ^_^
I think they were linked by the paint and paintings LOL

I already finished my first semester (very fast)
I only need to read some papers and complete the final assignments :)

I hope you're doing fine ^__^

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bon_san July 22 2018, 23:41:23 UTC
This is such a lovely fic! The manner in which Ohno and Jun interact is so sweet and soft, and the email was really so romantic! Ohno's quiet and not exactly the best with words, but that email was able to portray his thoughts and feelings for Jun so well, which is something I think the both of them really needed to be able to fully understand each other's feelings. Thank you so much for sharing this, you did a wonderful job!

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yun_miyake July 23 2018, 02:27:10 UTC
thanks so much for your lovely comment ;)
they needed to be more honest towards each other and so nice that ohno finally made it clear. His email seems to be able to open the way for their relationship.

Thanks so much for reading it
so happy that you found it lovely (^^)v

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