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Heroes: "Angel" (Mylar, PG-13)

Jul 28, 2007 01:40

Title: Angel
Author: airspaniel
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Mylar
Word Count: 1387
Spoilers: Five Years Gone
Warnings: Character death
Notes: For mylar_fic Summer fic-a-thon, week 4 - "death week." An AU continuation of what 5YG set up; what might have happened if the main events of that episode had not occurred, and the genocide had gone forward.

Summary: Millions ( Read more... )

mylar, heroes, angst, mohinder

Comments 50

poemwithnorhyme July 28 2007, 06:14:57 UTC

This was lovely! I enjoyed it immensely. I'm a sucker for fanfics that involve death, so this week has really been my forte. I can so see Mohinder killing himself after it being revealed that Nathan is actually Sylar, and the note, my angel of death. It's a bit odd, but I like it. ^_^

airspaniel July 28 2007, 06:55:56 UTC

Thank you! I know it's a bit strange, but I'm glad you liked it. The idea just wouldn't leave me alone. ^_^

tju_tju_tju_tju July 28 2007, 06:32:09 UTC

*falls over, dead from the awesome*

Not only did you kill Mohinder, you killed me. I hope you're happy.

He calmly reviews the statistics, not dwelling on the fact that the numbers on the page represent the very same people he tried for so long to find. The same people his father devoted his life to, and died for; and the same people he had been desperately trying to save for years.

That part kinda jumped out at me. Thought I'd mention it.

You. Kick. Ass.

airspaniel July 28 2007, 07:03:28 UTC

I am happy, thank you! Sorry I killed you, though. ^_~

I do loves me some dark irony.

Thank you so much! *^_^*

mistressmerr July 28 2007, 07:11:29 UTC

Oh WOW. That was just marvelous. It just felt so REAL, like of COURSE that's how it would have happened. And despite it being so obvious and right, there are still moments that smach you in the face and make you go 'damn'. The Time magazine cover, Mohinder going over the death count, and his laughing at the Sylar reveal in particular. Just amazingly well done. And pretty damn heart-wrenching to boot. Rawk.

airspaniel July 28 2007, 07:30:33 UTC

*^_^* Thank you very much!

prelusion July 28 2007, 07:23:01 UTC

You win at life.
Seriosuly.

When Mohinder found out Nathan was actually Sylar and was actually happy about it I was like "What the hell?!!!?!11oneone" but I'm pretty sure I get it now. I think.

airspaniel July 28 2007, 07:31:28 UTC

Or do you? 0.o *cue twilight zone music*

Just teasing. ^_~ Glad you liked it!

wisecracks July 28 2007, 07:26:46 UTC

asdfkgjhfhdlkhj! *clings to monitor*

airspaniel July 28 2007, 07:32:30 UTC

...is that a good thing or a bad thing? ^_~

wisecracks July 29 2007, 10:01:22 UTC

Oh, good thing. Very very good thing. When Momo just sorta snapped i started to go with him. When he misunderstood why he was seeing Sylar before him (right?) i lost intelligent thought. So by the end there was no way you were getting a coherent reply from me at all.

airspaniel July 29 2007, 15:02:53 UTC

Excellent. ^_______^ Thank you!