Heroes: "Surrender" (Mylar, R)

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Title: Surrender
Author: airspaniel
Recipient: rebootfromstart
Genre: Angst
Prompt: Alone in a crowd
Rating: R
Word Count: 1617
Notes: For the mylar_fic Summer fic-a-thon, week 1 - "angst week"

Summary: Mohinder takes a long walk on a cold night.

Comments

[drunken_hedghog]

Wow, you take this angst thing REALLY seriously. This was, can I use wow again? No? How about Whoohee? Whoohee is good? Whoohee then. Is anyone else coded to be turned on by being thrown up against a wall, or is it just Me and Mohinder?

“Admit it. Admit that you want me to touch you.” - Hell I'll admit it if Mohinder won't

[airspaniel]

Hey, you tell me to write angst, I don't pull my punches. ^_^

And being thrown against a wall? Easily in my top 3 turn ons. Guess that's why I like to write it. ^^;;

Glad you liked it, hon!

[paynesgrey]

Wow, this is incredible! I love the emotions here. It was so hot, but I adored how you ended it and it just 'fit' the mood of the piece. You really know how to get inside these characters. Guh! Wonderful!

[airspaniel]

Thank you! I'm happy that the characters came through. These two are always a challenge for me to write, but when they click, they really click. ^_^

[kael_raye]

Hee! I'm so loving the Mohinder torture...Sylar does it both physically and mentally. Beautiful detail! I really enjoyed reading this. ^_^

[airspaniel]

I'm so glad you liked it! ^_^ I, too, enjoy the Mohinder torture. It's not my fault he's pretty when he cries.

[greatwhitesnark]

And like the moth, immolation is his destiny.

Favorite line.

Damn, now that's good angst, right there.

[airspaniel]

Heh, that's my favorite line, too. First one I wrote. ^_^ Thanks so much!

[without_mission]

wow this was angst at it's best, it tore my heart and made me cry ;_; Poor Mo (hugs plushie) he needs him some Sylar (pets)

[airspaniel]

Thank you! And don't worry, he'll get some sweetness next week. ^_~