Heroes: "Surrender" (Mylar, R)

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Title: Surrender
Author: airspaniel
Recipient: rebootfromstart
Genre: Angst
Prompt: Alone in a crowd
Rating: R
Word Count: 1617
Notes: For the mylar_fic Summer fic-a-thon, week 1 - "angst week"

Summary: Mohinder takes a long walk on a cold night.

Comments

[edensrose]

This is really good!

Aww! Poor Mohinder...He's so abused!

[airspaniel]

Thank you very much! And yeah, he is, but you know he really likes it. ^_~

[cerebel]

Oh, wow. So very dark. That last sentence just really drives the point home - that Sylar has completely crushed Mohinder, by drawing out these feelings in him.

Excellent job.

[airspaniel]

Thank you! *^_^* I think it's interesting that Mohinder has been broken so entirely, and the person he wants to put him back together is the one that keeps smashing him in the first place. Vicious cycle, that. Of course, that's not always true, but here it applies.

[ivy_b]

Oh wow and poor Mohinder! Not bad enough that he wants his father's killer, but Sylar is really being merciless! I think Mohinder knows pretty much how Chandra died, considering he witnessed it through that dream-vision.

"Then I have a lesson for you, Professor..“We all want what we can’t have.” -So true, but what a cock-tease that Sylar.

[airspaniel]

D'oh! >.< Y'know, I never liked that sentence anyway. Thanks for the catch!

And thanks for the comment! Cocktease is kind of the nicest thing you can say about him here. ^_~

[airspaniel]

Thank you so much!

[chanelcoco]

And like the moth, immolation is his destiny.

Fantastic line. ♥

[airspaniel]

Hee! Thank you. ^_^