Chapter Three:
“I will hurt you, just to hold you standing in the rain.”
It was the best day of my life but also the worst.
A year ago, I was nominated for Best Supporting Actor but even though I was honored, I couldn’t truly enjoy it. I had been arguing with Noeru for a while over virtually everything, and he had been cold and distant when he
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I've been struggling a bit with this story because I've been wanting it to seem real and it's awesome to hear that it does ^^ Thanks for the review~ It helps clear my mind :D
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2nd chapter:
I don't know how to describe the feeling but I somehow felt that Ryo was just using Shige to avoid the pain...and I don't know I thought: "YAY~ Shige and Ryo, together! :)" but it had a bitter feeling because...well I thought it was sad that Ryo tries to flee from the pain he felt
3rd chapter:
Like it^^ I mean...okay Ryo just admitted that at first he was using Shige as a distraction but then he became his friend...so I'm happy for that. And I wish that Ryo could talk with Shige about his problems and of course I 'm curious how the relationship developed into a relationship with romantic feelings because Ryo still needs time to understand and to forget Noeru or at least to accept the end of their relationship~
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Yeah, their friendship had a strange beginning but it's good that Ryo saw that he was more than just a distraction. He vaguely hints at his problems at times. It's hard, since Shige obviously liked Ryo from the very beginning and Ryo's in love with Noeru even after the breakup. Very one-sided at the moment.
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I'm anticipating the RyoShige interactions now (and omg is Noeru going to come back? oO)
*sits patiently*
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Yeah, Noeru is kicked to the sidelines...for now ;p He's going to be in it throughout the rest
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I really like the way you've developed Noe's character, it never fails to amaze me how good you fit every AU aspect in their universe *___*
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Thanks~ <3
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sorry i'm so late, i just read all three chapters in a go, and i still have your previous fic to read... i've been too lazy, sorry.
the storyline is so powerful, it touches me deeply for some reason. you present the too in such defined way, i love that.
i don't know what else to say at the moment.
&hearts
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I'm glad it has touched you~ I really hope you enjoy the rest ;D
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and btw, i quite like your header, it's very... shige? xD
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