Snow and Ash - Chapter Thirteen Part 2

Nov 12, 2009 16:00

A few days later:

When I open the door, Naoya is standing there in a striped t-shirt and jeans holding up a white box. “I brought dessert.”

I take the box from him. “Thanks. You look nice.”

“So do you. Can I help you with anything?”

I see Shige arrive at the gate, staying there as if trying not to interrupt. “Can you check on the food? I’ll ( Read more... )

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yukinonamida November 13 2009, 00:54:07 UTC
Think back to the dinner conversation and then what Shiori said at the end and you'll have your answer :P

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mahalkita57 November 13 2009, 00:05:54 UTC
I am speechless.
Amazing chapter like always. (:

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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yukinonamida November 13 2009, 00:54:30 UTC
:D I'm glad you liked it~

Thanks for the comment &hearts

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rainy_fruit November 13 2009, 00:24:12 UTC
Yah great chapter! Again. =D

And holy crap, Reiko = Shiori what. I hope Koyama gives Yamapi another chance...I mean, he's been a real asshole, but c'mon. KOYAPI!

Mika makes me nervous. =/ And the RyoShige was stepping on eggshells this whole chapter! I hope the crappy stuff in their way doesn't get them down too badly...

Thanks for a spectacular chapter! This one really revealed a lot!

~Kat

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yukinonamida November 13 2009, 00:56:51 UTC
Thanks...and thanks again for the help ;D

Yupyup~ The end was already beginning even before Shige got his new power.

They have been through a lot, and so they won't give up on each other that easily. :o

:D I thought I'd spice things up lol

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mikiyu_chan November 13 2009, 00:38:01 UTC
what happened? just what happens nooow?????
i'm curious!!!
probably won't be able to sleep tonight....
oh my.....!
hope next chapter comes soon!
anywaay~
does that means that end is coming near?

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yukinonamida November 13 2009, 00:58:58 UTC
Don't lose sleep! :o

It's coming towards the end, but there's still a lot of story left :D

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mikiyu_chan November 13 2009, 08:23:31 UTC
oh! i'm glad then! <3
i'm curious and wanna know how it'll end, but...
more than that, i lode what you write so i don't want it to end soon~!

oh....speaking of it... do you already have any other fic planned after you end this?

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yukinonamida November 13 2009, 13:18:01 UTC
I don't want this story to end either~ It's so much fun to write it :( But all good things must come to an end eventually, right?

At the moment I don't think I'm going to start another multi-chap. I think I might start doing one-shots if anything.

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miss_jelly November 13 2009, 01:05:33 UTC
MIIIKAAAAAAAA homg, I don't feel bad for hating her at all, now :Db gawd, so looking forward to more, gaaaah... so Pi is like a bargaining chip? :o poor Pi, man

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yukinonamida November 13 2009, 01:51:55 UTC
lol I never liked her but then again I knew what she was from the beginning so...

Basically.

Thanks for the comment :D

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