[Fic][Arashi] Step and Go 1/1 [R]

[yukiko_neechan]

Title: Step and Go

Author: Yukiko

Warnings: Yaoi, evil!Johnny, angsty!Jun, child molestation, language… oh, and sap.

Pairings: Aiba/Jun, Jun/Ohno

Summary: A look at how Jun entered the Jimusho, and why he doesn’t like to be touched. Over the years, Aiba is the only one able to penetrate his armor…

Disclaimer: Everything that follows is fictional, and

Comments

[kawaiitensai]

This was nice. I loved the way you potrayed their emotions~ ♥

[yukiko_neechan]

thanks!

and here i was thinking (upon re-reading this over, twice) that i made my characters emote WAY too much. O.O i'm glad it wasn't annoying!! haha.

[eve_aida]

poor jun-kun~

[yukiko_neechan]

isn't he?? i've always thought he had a different air about him than the other arashi members. i had fun coming up with a backstory. :)

[eve_aida]

yea, sometimes he sort of like to move in his own pace..may you write another genre of arashi fic next time =)

[yukiko_neechan]

oh gosh, i love angst. it's almost all i write, when it comes to other fandoms... but i'll try my hand at a decent fluff and see how it comes out. O.O

Thumbs up!

[maiaide]

That was excellent. I was anticipating a bit more action between Aiba and Jun, but then I realized that's not the point of the fic. Really good characterization. And who DOESN'T think Johnny is dirty old fart??

Re: Thumbs up!

[yukiko_neechan]

hahaha, good point!

more aibajun action (*eyebrow wiggle*) next story! i promise! *smirk*

[akin16sk]

I have to admit that the thought of Johnny harassing Jun occured to me as well...he was/is such a pretty, pretty boy. I liked this story as well. You potrtrayed Matsujun very well and the moment when he was breaking down with Aiba, or rather Aiba was breaking him down was written very well. I thought the Ohno part could be a little more accentuated, but it was a fine story to begin with. I am putting it to my memories for sure.

[yukiko_neechan]

oh man, this was such a rushed job, i'm a little ashamed to say. but my jun character came out more or less like i wanted him to, so i'm glad. thanks for the review on that!

i agree about the ohno-jun interaction. i'm thinking of having a strict ohno-jun story next time. haha. that's when i start to refer to all those cute little kisses during concerts all over the place... i'm always a sucker for fanservice!

[akin16sk]

i am always for jun/ohno, although i love primarily jun/sho. yet there is something in jun/ohno i can't fight...all that rabu. i loooove fanservice.
sometimes rushed job is the best job, you don't have time to overthink things (ahem like i do ahem....) :))

[yukiko_neechan]

i read this story over. PLUS i found out that aiba's hospitalization was due to a collapsed lung, and he fell ill during a rehearsal for a performance... ahhhh, i so want to change this story now... all the wrongness!

[winged_lily]

I really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. The story was very appealing and I loved how you portrayed Jun. =)

<3 Trisha

[yukiko_neechan]

thanks a bunch!

ah, and you're the one that created the facebook group for aibajun! i must commend you on the fantastic idea! :)