The Frozen Solitude at the End of Oblivion: MyungYeol One Shot

[yuki_pon]

Title: The Frozen Solitude at the End of Oblivion
Author: yuki_pon
Beta: kingheechul
Fandom: INFINITE
Disclaimer: I AM LEE SUNGYEOL'S LONG LOST SISTER.
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kim Myungsoo (L) / Lee Sungyeol
Word(s):  2, 700
Genre(s)Rating : G,  AU
Summary: They met by chance, just like your favorite song played on random.
A/N: My first INIFINITE fanfic.. that I posted.

Comments

[kuroidaiyamondo]

It was great, but I feel bad for SungYeol that his feelings weren't returned and then their friendship fell apart...

MyungSoo why couldn't you fall in love with him, don't you see that SungYeol is the most perfect being on earth?! *biased*

Some things leave me wondering, why MyungSoo acted like he did, why he shows up and wants to talk to him, those things.

The painting must have been beautiful! o.O

Next time you write more MyungYeol, write a happy MyungYeol okay? xD
My poor heart can't take more-or-less sad endings where they don't end up together. xD

Fighting! ^_^

[yuki_pon]

It's the most heartbreaking part, the broken friendship~ ):

YES SUNGYEOL IS THE PERFECT GUY FOR MYUNG.

My beta was also wondering that too! It's hard to pull out something from Myungsoo's side since I based the story from my own experience. But I'll try to make one to clear things? ^^

Yes, it must've been. <3 I want to make something like that too.

I will write something sweet and fluffy next time~!

Thank you so much for taking time to comment here and say nice things. I feel happy since it's my first Infinite fic posted. <3

[prince_smutty]

The fact that Myungsoo din't reciprocate and slowly detach himself from the friendship was the best part for me. It makes this fic brood that suffering atmosphere where you wan't to spite the norms but also learn from it.
And how you ended it was really good. A vague yet hopeful ending for what maybe a second chance.

And the song was really great too. It cultivated the right feelings as i read along.

I know japanese, do you?

[yuki_pon]

I actually based this fic from my own experiences, so I'm happy that you like that part best. <3
Yeah, it would be just too easy if Myungsoo didn't like him just because. It will make more sense that he will be seen together with a girl.

Thanks! My beta actually wanted me to write another fic that tells Myungsoo's side of the story. But since this one came from my experience, I think it will take me time to write a proper one coming from Myungsoo.

Yeah, just a bit. I understand and know japanese more than I know korean. ^_^

Thank you so much for commenting and sharing your thoughts! It really means a lot!

[prince_smutty]

it'd definitely be awesome if there's a myungsoo's POV version.

if this is your experience, are you a guy just like sungyeol? or just the part where it failed to transition from platonic to romantic?

i'm a guy btw.

[yuki_pon]

Hmm. Well the I'm not a guy. But I got the story from how I was rejected.. And just let out all emotions in the story.. ^_^

[penny_lane_42]

Good work on your first fic! The first half has the right lighthearted bff kind of feeling to it, just really nice. And then poor precious Sungyeol getting his heart broken. I like how the ending is open-ended: they get another chance, but you don't specify whether that's just another chance at friendship or another chance at moving to romance.

Yay for a new Infinite author!

[yuki_pon]

OMG. YOU COMMENTED.
/fangirl screams/

Thank you for the nice feedback! I'll do my best to write another one! <3 <3

[all_nostalgia]

Babe, write more. I like this very much. ❤