My Personal Rollercoaster

Jul 17, 2009 13:05



Sometimes the things you say are too hurtful. Sometimes the words you speak break my heart. You bring me up so high, but then you let me down. Before I can gather all the broken pieces, you crush me again and shatter me once more.

From up to down to up again. Sometimes the things you do are too thoughtful. ( Read more... )

p: gtop

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 05:09:16 UTC
SPOT~
for xbigbangx

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xbigbangx July 17 2009, 05:51:02 UTC
aaww. This is just so cute. Makes me go 'aaaww' all over ! x3
some of my fav lines:

I’m falling in love all over again.
that just makes me smile. :'D

I want to run away, but only far enough to make you miss me.

and but of course that one! hehe ^^ It just makes my heart beat a little too fast, this drabble/one shot.

Such a wonderfully written piece. I love it. Thankies for writing it! ^^

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 05:52:38 UTC
I'm glad you like it
Thanks for requesting!

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xbigbangx July 17 2009, 05:54:51 UTC
Of course I like it! I mean come on, it's gtop XD I'd love anything GTOP/Big Bang :P (related XD)

Naw, Thankies for accepting the request. ^^

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openedlocket July 17 2009, 05:16:59 UTC
My favorite line would have to be 'I am falling in love all over again' beautiful. It got to me in more ways than one, he wants to get away before he gets hurt again but he can't because it will only hurt him more. Despite the shortness it's very awesome, like everything else ;)

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f_i_x_m_e July 17 2009, 05:32:44 UTC
This is very well written and beautiful.^^
Great job!

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 05:33:58 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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minn_rox July 17 2009, 05:58:20 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww....why gtop? no more gri?

haha..jk..ignore dat..one minute i'm gone, then you're back with another fic which i have to say is BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN..

are you sure you are out of "creative juices"? coz this one is totally contradicting your words, bb..

i totally wubbing your last lines..i see you like to have the last word..hmm..

ILY as always..come back with gri ok? we need more gri so we can survive..

dont go on hiatus too long..i'll miss you more..*huggles*
lets talk more next tyme bb..

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 06:38:33 UTC
Thank you SO much for reading it!
Yes, I am out of creative juices because this one isn't as good as I wanted it to be.
ILY2!
Yesh, we need to talk more soon.
Would you mind if I add you on mail/chat?

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minn_rox July 17 2009, 09:00:26 UTC
sure..no prob..what are you using? YM - hanim_chaos89@yahoo.com or msn at minn_rox@live.com or gtalk at gdtoryluvminn@gmail.com..whichever suits you..

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minky_ccl July 17 2009, 12:08:10 UTC
This may be short but it is beautiful and sad at the same time. The relationship is like a push and pull effect.

xbigbangx, thanks for requesting this and yuki_dizon, thanks for writing. I need more GTOP fics. *grins*

May I request for one too?

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 12:15:43 UTC
Aww thanks for reading!
Go ahead. Please just give the prompt via a PM.
Thanks so much!

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