Aleatory (2/2)

[ltgmars]

Title: Aleatory
Fandom: Yama Pair, Ohmiya, Sakumiya, Nino/Ohno/Sho (Arashi RPS)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Drama/Romance, AU
Word Count: 15,731
Summary: AU. For once, Sho and Ohno decide not to go on their annual summer vacation. And in the mind-numbing process of not going anywhere and not doing anything, they end up meeting Nino.
Warnings: homophobia

Comments

[rebecka_jo]

engrossing. joyful. completely lovely.

thank you <3

[ltgmars]

I am glistening with affection for you. JSYK.

[chelshock]

this was so much fun to read, especially tiny sho's perception of himself in the first section. so perfect ♥

well-written threesome fic (especially without aiba or jun) is pretty hard to come by, but you pulled it off extremely well. the mental transition for sho from ladykiller asshole to mildly sentimental dork was especially fantastic.

...and now i'll be watching this comm and reading your older posts. i hope we get to see more from you soon! :D

[ltgmars]

I'm glad you had fun! I actually had an incredibly good time writing this (15k in five days is NaNoWriMo-speed writing, which I've never been able to achieve until now), so maybe that came through?

I hope to write more soon! Thanks for stopping by. :3

[maibachan]

Brilliant. Seriously.
I am semi-inchoherent as a believe you have robbed me of the ability to do anything other than flail over how awesome this was.
The whole thing. You had me from start to finish, and I almost didn't want it to end.
I guess this how it must feel to be pawned by someone's writing.
<3
Thank you for sharing this!

[ltgmars]

Ahaha.

...

(I'm awkward and I don't know how to respond to compliments sometimes.)

Thanks for reading! ♥

[kantanaamaya]

I have so much love for this. It was well written and I got completely sucked into it. I am just at a loss for words of what else I can say about it.

It was just mesmerizing. ♥

[ltgmars]

Yaaaaaaay! ♥

[anoudegozaruna]

I don't think I have the adequate words to describe how much I loved reading this. I am literally speechless. But I think what I love most about it is that it seemed so real, like that this could or actually did happen in real life. Because the thoughts and emotions you put into the characters felt so genuine.

I'm really failing at giving this fic the praise it deserves so I'll just stop before I start babbling. So I'll just end it with this: ♥

[ltgmars]

Was it good for you? It was good for me.

But seriously, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

ETA: I fail at fake hitting on people, apparently. :|
ETA2: Or real hitting on people? :D?

[anoudegozaruna]

Oh, it was good. Very, very good. [/slutty]

I also suck at hitting on people. Or knowing when someone is hitting on me. It does not bode well for my love-life. :/ TMI?