but every now and then, look around.

Sep 11, 2009 22:27

as the doors open, you realize your dreams. you realize what you want to do in life, whether it be to save lives or write novels. everyone has something to do while they're alive, and jung yunho was no different.

‘he’s flat lining, get me a crash cart!’

the staff all wait, it’s not that he has no authority, it’s just that the patient has ( Read more... )

fandom: dbsk, length: oneshot, focus: yunho, focus: jaejoong, genre: drama, genre: angst, rating: pg, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, genre: romance

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genma4600 September 12 2009, 06:53:05 UTC

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yoochunlove September 12 2009, 17:56:02 UTC
the html heart is much loved bb ♥

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genma4600 September 12 2009, 21:21:41 UTC
you're aaalllliiivvveee bb!

I thought you were kidnapped.

/glomps

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yoochunlove September 12 2009, 23:11:30 UTC
yes, i'm alive :)
oh my gosh, if i was, then you would have heard about it on the news, rofl. since we both live in la.

/hugs ♥

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mizzymilaa September 12 2009, 08:03:14 UTC
im speechless.................(O_0)

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yoochunlove September 12 2009, 17:55:42 UTC
rofl. ♥

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reikonan September 12 2009, 10:38:12 UTC
beautiful but sad...

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yoochunlove September 12 2009, 17:55:26 UTC
thank you bb :)

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joongieforeva September 12 2009, 14:42:35 UTC
so what happen in the end?
sorry i don't understand

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moonkissedx September 12 2009, 14:59:58 UTC

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moonkissedx September 12 2009, 15:07:47 UTC
everyone has something to do while their alive,
they're

the words of a dieing man
dying

his su;try lips
:\ typo.

but kim jaejoong and jung yunho will are fighters to the end
will be? are? :/

this was... sad. ): beautiful, you know, how you write so well, just, inspires me, a lot.

sorry for picking out your errors, hope you don't mind.

just... no, this does not suck at all. this was amazing, srsly, this felt so real, how you described everything, just, ♥

asldkjlkzml /incoherent

absolutely gorgeous.

♥;

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yoochunlove September 12 2009, 17:44:17 UTC
ah, nonono, thank you for picking them out. i'm a really lazy person so when i have grammatical errors, i usually can't find them cause i hate re-reading my work. so thank you! :)

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