"Empty Minutes"

[yodaamidala]

I wrote this short story today while (not)listening to religion class. :)
It's about a long-time couple named Tim and Lily.
Let me know what you think! :D

Tim and Lily sat quietly across the room from each other, both unwilling to speak. In all of their arguments as a couple, this has proven to be the most heated one and no one is willing to give

Comments

[chescalicious]

Would you believe I was crying after reading this? It kind of tells about my situation right now, so yeah. Well done. :)

[yodaamidala]

aww *huuuuuuug chesca*
I hope you're okay. :)
(btw, this site is very
inspiring. Check it out if you
have time. :)

thanks chesca!

[whichbaby]

Bittersweet. For some reason, that's what came to my head.

I envision a screenplay... ooooh ooooh I wanna adapt this (when I'm bored, I guess)! :p

Then again I'm not into romantic stuff. Haven't felt love in ages.

[yodaamidala]

this is for my INSERCH! hahaha
we're doing a stop motion film :)

[whichbaby]

You can do that now for INSERCH? Ooooh.

Things have changed. :D

[superbea]

aww sad :( but great :P
can relate to the first part (ugh!) but i don't want to experience the latter part! haha =P

[yodaamidala]

aw i dont want to experience this either!!
hahaha i dont know why i thought of this scenario! :))

[instantbox]

okay ummm... i WISH i can relate :))
but yeah GUJAB BEBOYYYY!

[yodaamidala]

thanks beboy! I dont want to relate :)) di ko kaya!! hahaha

[sarahmarie054]

Beautiful writing. Just beautiful. It tugged at my heart. :)

[yodaamidala]

aww thank you so much :)