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yma2

Death Note Fanfic!

Feb 23, 2007 03:14

Going to Bangor for a few days to celebrate my birthday, meet friends and run a Trigun game. I've been planning this game for ages, I hope it goes well...

At any rate, I'll be back next week. I was kinda hoping to do a Death Note Fanfic, and what do you know I sorta managed it!
This is hot off the press. I would have asked someone like user to beta ( Read more... )

death note, real life, fanfic

Comments 4

rosehiptea February 23 2007, 04:00:44 UTC

I like this a lot. I think these feeling for L really ring true, that he is fascinated with him but he still wants to kill him.

And the "first friend" line really hit me. Good job.

yma2 March 1 2007, 17:30:22 UTC

Thank you! I hope my next one is better though...

cheesymonkey February 25 2007, 23:55:34 UTC

I really liked it. Awesome to the max. I was wondering how you'd do with writing L, who seems to me like he'd be rather difficult to put to paper (or computer screen). In any case, you did a great job and L (as well as Light's) characterization was right on the money.
A few type-os here and there. Like:
"Approximately seven on the List is L’s hygiene, or lack of it.
Hygene (should be hygiene) is a preliminary matter for L. Light thinks he would hardly wash at all if it were not for the insistences of Watari and, now, Light himself ( ... )

yma2 March 1 2007, 17:36:38 UTC

Thanks so much for the review, and the corrections. If I put this up anywhere else I'll make a few changes.
Actually I found writing L relitivly easy, it's Light that I find tough to write he's so... difficult, at this stage.
I do have an idea or two for other DN fics and hopefully I'll get them down soonish. I hope you can review them when I do, feedback is always wonderful!