Fanfiction: Johnny's Entertainment: Half Steps

Dec 08, 2008 01:11

Title: Half Steps
Fandom: Johnny's Entertainment
Pairings: Murakami Shingo/Nishikido Ryo, Murakami Shingo/Yokoyama Yuu
Warnings: Slash.
Status: One-shot, complete.
Notes: I'm a little uncertain about this fic. First time writing Kanjani, and I'm entirely uncertain about the characterisation. Ahh. Well anyway, written for zukkii, who needs cheering up. ( Read more... )

!johnny's, slash, *kanjani8, fic

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nyw December 7 2008, 17:53:37 UTC
Don't die! And I'm so glad that you like it. If you didn't I would have deleted it and re-written it; I don't want to get these particular people wrong for you when it's meant to be for you. :D

And I can't believe this took me 3 weeks to write. It was immensely difficult to, somehow... and I ended up cutting out some of the bits I told you about. ^^""

-snugs- Take care! :D :D

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moonbyrd December 7 2008, 20:52:45 UTC
Oh. Oh, oh, oh. This is incredible. It's so sweet, so bittersweet, and so wonderful. The stilted emotional awareness, how you describe it, it's just phenomenal. My heart just breaks for all three of them throughout but the ending is so sweet and I'm just awestruck by how you wrote that last bit. Oh, <3!

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nyw December 8 2008, 01:08:30 UTC
Awww, thank you. Really high praise, which makes me feel slightly better about this fic! <333

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talisa_ahn December 8 2008, 07:17:05 UTC
thanks for sending this one my way. ^-^

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nyw December 8 2008, 10:17:49 UTC
I'm really glad you liked the characterisation! That was the bit I was most worried about. Thank you for reading!

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alphareal December 8 2008, 00:15:08 UTC
i love it..
beautiful~ just beautiful~

b.. but.. but..
yokohina.. >_<

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nyw December 8 2008, 10:18:24 UTC
Haha sorry. ^^" But thank you for reading!

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mujun December 8 2008, 04:31:54 UTC
Really beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

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nyw December 8 2008, 10:18:57 UTC
ajskdalskdjkazlsd I REALLY LIKE YOUR FIC. So hearing that you liked it means a lot to me! Thank you for reading!

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