The Problem with Mortality [AFF Secret Santa MyungYeol]

[yeolmonster]

Part II

Myungyeol; PG; Drama (Angst?)

Originally posted on AFF's Secret Santa exchange for the prompt: "The pains of unrequited love."

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Comments

[yeoleka]

How i miss your fics,thx soo much!i checked aff and saw you update and just like "oW Ma gawd!!she's back!"this is perfect as always,even angst is OOC for you,but still you're the best!

[yeolmonster]

dude
I know I suck :(
This is the last time I ever write angst
*rolls around on the floor*

[yeolmonster]

:3
Thanks!
I'm sorry I suck at angst ;~; I'll try not to write it again if it looks OOC for me. :3

Thank you for following me although I barely update *bows* :3

[funny1310]

You wrote ANGST!!!!! OMG!!!! I just thought you never write angst :(

Myungsoo and Sungyeol are the right persons for each other but the wrong timing. It would be more angsty if Sungyeol dead and then the plot twists!! He's still alive and healthy but got a boyfriend that not Myungsoo. Why did you do this to my Myungie? :((((((
Anyway, it's just my opinion, but this ending is already perfect. It would be somehow ridiculous if they're back together and abandone Woohyun.

Write more angst, you definitely have potential for this genre :D

[yeolmonster]

:( I'm sorry!!

Myungie kind of deserved it. He needs to be taught to be less selfish. :)
But don't worry, I'm sure they'll figure it out somehow. They always do!

(It's okay, I think I'll never write any angst anymore. people seemed really shocked about it, as if it's an abomination, so I guess it's not that good!)

Thank you so much for reviewing. :3

[alhena_17]

WHAAAAAAAAAT?? WAIT NO. I DIDN'T SPENT MY LAST MORNING OF STUDY READING OF DORK YEOL, POOPING DONGWOO ( mr Jang is gongo right?) AND CRY OVER YEOL DEATH WITH MYUNGSOO. FINISHING WITH NAMU. AND A BIG HUGE TROLL
that broke my heart

btw, despite everything, i really really liked this story! it's different from your last ones, but different in a really good way! I'm happy you're back, when you said you didn't want to write anymore cause everything got erased, well thay really scared the shit out of me! (ku is trying to use English phrasing)
Princess Angst is not your way, but i still love you <3

[yeolmonster]

PRINCESS.
YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO COMMENT! :0 YOU SAID IT'S NOT WORKING!

(Mr, jang isn't dongwoo lol)

THANK YOU MY DARLING.
I'm starting to think you're the only one who actually liked it for real ;~; but it's okay. I vow to never write angst again. Just not my thing.
okay.

[penny_lane_42]

I'm so happy to see more fic from you! I really loved how you started out with Sungyeol being so defensive and closed-off and then had Myungsoo win him over slowly through sheer persistence. And you had lots of them being playful jerks to each other, which I don't see enough of in fic but which is clearly part of their real life dynamic. When it seemed like Sungyeol was dead, I was super torn because on the one hand it seemed realistic so I was okay with it, but on the other I didn't think you'd write something where Sungyeol dies! And the end was a bit abrupt but an interesting reversal. Really enjoyed this, and I hope to see more fic from you soon!

[yeolmonster]

Thank you so so much!
Ah *blushes* getting praised by you seriously makes me flutter around. You're my favourite author.
I... um, tried this angst thing, and I don't think it worked out too well for me, hehe
I guess it was a bit abrupt, but there's going to be a sequel to it, by the prompt-giver, so my hands are tied!
But thank you, it makes me feel more secure to go outside my comfort zone!
*hugs*

[penny_lane_42]

Aw, thank you, hon! That's so sweet of you to say!

I actually find writing angst easier than writing happy things; for a long time I didn't think I'd ever be able to write humor. We all have different things that come easier or harder to us, so you might want to keep trying and get more comfortable with it. But write whatever you want, of course.

And if there's going to be a sequel, then I take back what I said about abrupt. In that case, it works as more of a cliffhanger, which is meant to be abrupt. Looking forward to the sequel!

[yeolmonster]

It is, hehe

Don't worry bb, ilovesungyeoli is writing a sequel tho, so you'll have something to expect right!

I'm really happy you liked it though! Sorry if it's so angsty! I solemnly swear I'm not going to write any angst from now on! :3