If I am with you under this sky for lotusk

[yeolliepopday]

For: lotusk
Title: If I Am With You Under This Sky
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Kai
Rating: R
Warning(s) Brief homophobia
Length: 11K
Summary: Jongin wasn't looking for a summer romance, but one came running up to him anyway.
Author's note: Hi lotusk -- this ... got away from me. Nonetheless, I hope it is everything you wanted from the prompt you gave and more.

Comments

[lotusk]

Screams!!! You wrote me chankai! I wish I could read it right away but I have an urgent deadline I need to take care of first and then I'll be back to give this fic my full attention and love. Just know that I'm very grateful and very excited to read this! I'll be back as soon as I can. Bless

Also, I love the Crush track and I love Goblin so ... kinda dying rn

[lotusk]

This story is moody and edgy and raw in all the right ways. You really did a wonderful job of capturing jongin's ennui and careful "indifference" to his mother's homophobia. Like he acts like he feels nothing when that's not the case at all. I find his character so relatable in that sense.

And then there's Chanyeol who likes him unconditionally even though they've barely met. Chanyeol is often portrayed as a loud, boisterous character and it's always nice when I encounter fics where writers portray him as a calm person who feels things deeply. Thank you for this ;;;

I really enjoyed their interactions. The teasing and the snarky comments and the intimate moments and chanyeol not being able to get enough of jongin's beauty and the train and just everything. Also one of my favorite scenes is the one where jongin's niece comes to his room because her mom said he needed hugs now. That was the sweetest thing ;;;

Anyway, long story short, I loved this fic so much! Thank you for writing this beautiful piece!!! ♡

[fadetomorrow]

i'm so glad you liked it! esp since i feel like this kind of spun out of control given your original prompt haha i've been wanting to write a longish chankai for a while, so i'm happy that i got someone who wanted it!

[fadetomorrow]

thank you! so happy you liked it ♥

[caterplina]

Just like jongin fell in love with chanyeol i fell in love with their relationship. honestly, it was perfect. i loved that jongin was unsure about where they would stand at the end of summer but they talked it out quite quickly. that was great.

i also liked the setting. i usually don't like this type of stories, rich kid and an employee, but i like how you portrayed jongin and also that chanyeol wasn't poor. that made their relationship different to me.

i loved this fic! thank you so much for sharing ^^

[fadetomorrow]

aww tysm!! ♥ and yeah i didn't want it to be too cliche so i'm glad it worked for you! :)

[hangrua]

This is awesome ; ; ChanKai has always been my soft spot I'm so weak right now ; ;

I love this, I love everything in this. I love how Jongin and Chanyeol fell in love, spent their time together having fun like Jongin deserved it. I love when Chanyeol looked out for Jongin, or when Jongin for the first time stood up to protect his love, proudly state who is the real Jongin. Their love was pure and passionate, just like a fierce hot summer but peaceful at night.

Thank you so much for writing this!

[fadetomorrow]

thank you! chankai's one of my soft spots too so i'm happy you enjoyed it!!

[wek9876]

Summer fling turn to boyfriend forever. I love it. And, yeah, stereotype or whatever. We still need to respect our mother. Nonetheless, this is perfect.

[fadetomorrow]

ty! i'm glad you liked it :) :)